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Published: 2006-08-19 15:30:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 484; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 1
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Title: ImaginaryHe's not really there,
But why can't they see
That my imaginary friend
Is very special to me.
He goes where I go,
I go where he goes.
They say I'm going crazy.
I just stick up my nose.
They took me somewhere
For me to get well.
So I said to my imaginary
Friend, a sad, "Farwell".
I have a new friend
Though not quite like the old
She's as real as it gets,
Just like fool's gold.
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Excellent! It has a cool little rythm to it. I LOVE the last two lines
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Thank You! Thanks for the 
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This belongs in 'fixed' as it has a pattern of end-rhyme.
Try cutting down the longer lines to five syllables. I reckon the five syllable lines are by far the most interesting and if you had written the rest of the piece like that you would really be on to something.
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thank you! I'm not that good at writing poetry (not that I don't enjoy reading it!). thanks for the help, I will work on that asap!
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thats a great poem, so the new friend is fake to that sucks
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