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READ THE MANGA HERE: tapastic.com/series/wtsm
Speedpaint link: youtu.be/P0kNrJmPLsI
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Genres:
Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural, Slice of life
Plot summary:
After six former childhood friends reunite in high school, Elyse and Jhyn encounters a girl that only they can see. Although the mysterious girl has no memories of her past, she is able to show them visions of the future. Can they alter the impending fate of their friends, before the inevitable day arrives?
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Comments: 178
Thank you so much for this super long and detailed critique *Q* I really appreciate you taking your time to write this <333
i totally agree with the dress thing! I think at one point I thought about it but then I was like nah too lazy to fix it but now it's starting to really bother me too so I think I probably should've donesomething xD
and haha I did put a lot of work into the eyes~ I'm super happy to hear the positive feedback *v* this was super helpful <333 thank you so much again
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I'm glad that I could be of help to you
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this is really amazing and could go on any cover,
but maybe you should work on the originality a bit more.i
really like how you managed to draw at this angle,( cuz
when i do, i suck!)but you dont.the detail on the waving hair
is real nice!the deatail is good, no amazing, its gust mabe the
bace of the peoples face is flat kinda, but we don't notice it that
much.i love the effort you put in your pics backround. that alone
is cool, this overall(im looking at it in awe) is awesome!
i hope you take my tips and advice into consideration, thanks for reading!
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It seems like the faces being flat is a big problem for this piece cuz someone else mentioned it as well xD
Thank you very much for this wonderful critique! ^^
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your welcome, hoped it helped!
it's a small detail, but i love your art overall!
it amazing!!!!!!!
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Let me start off by saying that I love your use of colors in this piece! It really sets the mood and atmosphere for the manga.The details, the wrinkles on the clothes, and the way the soft light reflects off them is truly mesmerizing, and it makes me eager to read the first page.
I really have to look to find much that needs improving. However, I would point out that the character in the center (the one with the shorts and dark hair) could use improving on her hairline. It looks like it needs to be lowered a bit.
In addition, I also noticed their heads look flat in comparison to their necks. The lighting on their faces is fine, but I would suggest being more dynamic with the shadows on the necks, and careful with the line that separates their head from their neck.
All in love, I was truly impressed by the cover, and I look forward to reading future pages of When the Stars Misalign.
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Hahah thank you very much! Someone else mentioned the flat faces thing too omg xD I always chicken out a bit when it comes to shadows on the faces loool so yea you're spot on there!
Thanks a lot for this wonderful critique *Q* I'll try my best to fix some of the things you mentioned <333
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You're very welcome! Glad I can help <3
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me encanto la imagen tanto en color como en sombras pero creo que la cara de la chica de adelante esta un poco mas estilizada de lo normal. por lo demas esta genial. El fondo le da una vitalidad unica y la posicion de los personajes esta bien dispuesta. No tengo nada mas que comentar sobre el dibujo pero deviant pide minimo 100 palabras. solo me queda agregar que estoy deseoso de leer esta historia y que me encanta la vitalidad y frescura que tu dibujo transmite. Sigue asi que vas por muy buen camino. Ojala te sirva esta criticba y no la tomes a mal.
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ohhh. well. to put it in a small context. i think the face of the girl in the front of the picture is strange, a little out of perspective (i think i'm saying it well)
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That you very much! Unfortunately I don't understand spanish so I had to run this through google translate xD I'm not sure how much of this it translated properly but either way I appreciate the feedback (:
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i realy love this! ;w; your tutorials and ways of making manga (and the fact that you've made a really cool-accurate manga) motivated me to make my own. great work!
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You are really good. I'm more of a traditional artist.
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KISS KISS FALL IN LOVE! im sorry... I love it though!! * smooches*
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This is so beautiful!! Oh, I would definitely walk by and pick this up off the shelf in a book store or library.
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ahhahaha if you can win it over? ;D
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I am sure one day It will fall for me and my charms
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The style reminds me of the Fate series. Very nice work.
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This looks great. Going to check out the rest of your artwork
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Enchanting. I'll be sure to check out your manga sometime ^^
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I love the whole composition of the ilustration.. for me the use of colors, ilumination, etc. was so good.
And well in adition, about manga, I think that history is so interesting and that is normal that firsts chapters who are introducers are a little slow about trama, For me the introduction is so important and the premise is so good.
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thank you very much for your support <33!
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