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revois [2011-12-20 02:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Hello there! This is a pretty cute picture, but there are some things that could be made better. For starters, there are quite a few anatomy things you could fix. Look, she's missing her left hand! I know it's supposed to be hidden in her skirt, but look at yourself in the mirror and check to see how far down your hand goes. Also, on her other arm, her elbow should be lower or at a different angle, it is awkward how it is now. Try and work on the face shape, too, her chin is pointy and her actual face seems to be scootched to the right of the pic a bit. Work on the highlights of the hair, they seem a bit unnatural.
The texture works fine for the background, but on the girl it should not be that flat. It should mold to the body and the folds of the cloth.

All in all, it's cute! These are just little fixes that will make the picture better!

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CaptnPenguin [2011-12-19 21:21:55 +0000 UTC]

well hi there. I'm here to critique. Take note that my critiques are meant to be objective and by no means offensive. alright? lets roll.

I really like the strawberry theme and color palette. I know it's not your character, so you didn't design the fashion, but you did a great job on the frills in the outfit and the flow of the skirt.

far as the texture goes, it's nice, but it's not flowing with the creases of the fashion at all and comes off flat. it's fine flat for the bg, but on the clothes it needs more bends, warping, modifications, etc to look more believable.

the chins a bit too pointy and the cheeks need a bit more curving to them. curve the eyelashes somewhat more so they don't come off as barbs and too sharp. I do like the flow of the hair and how the strands are done, just fine tune the highlights in it, they seem a bit peculiar and not matching the anime ish style.

the skirt seems to be flowing with the motion in the body, but the clothing creases on the torso aren't going with the body flow and come off as flat lines rather than creases. cloth creases are hard, but you'll get used to them

the blush on the face is a tad too strong, and the eye comes off a bit strange due to the way you style the iris. I rather like how you don't make the fingers look too rounded and how you payed attention to the bones in the fingers to show their bending, and also nice how you added the finger nails, which are commonly not done due to the influx of anime inspirations

to sum up, great color palette, simple but good posing and anatomy, and great job on the skirt and the outfit frills, just work on incorporating the textures more, and tweak a few things on the face shape wise and style wise. good work

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Merieth [2011-12-09 03:33:10 +0000 UTC]

looks cute~

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chocomax [2011-12-08 11:06:11 +0000 UTC]

awww.....!!!//must get started

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melted-ices [2011-12-08 04:58:14 +0000 UTC]

so shojo like

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