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Published: 2016-07-25 10:48:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1424; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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I had to wrestle between helping my sister grieve for her cat, as well as work between three different computers, but it's finally out!

*Gasp!* Papyrus cooks things other than spaghetti?! Well, with his culinary goals, he does have to practice with more than just one thing. Just too bad he still sucks at it, poor guy.

That was my first attempt at drawing skeleton feet, and I liked how they turned out! Yay! X3

With my (tentative, probably gonna send back?) new computer's higher resolution, I decided to go ahead and submit these comics a bit bigger too, since I'm sure many others have higher resolutions too.

I might change my coloring style just a tad, yet again, aaargh! We'll see by the next page's release. But I anticipate that might be a while, since I probably have to send this computer back or get a new one. Streams will be on hiatus until I figure all that out.

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Gamerkat11 [2022-09-01 01:50:58 +0000 UTC]

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ZaCloud In reply to Gamerkat11 [2022-09-01 04:10:16 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowBloodTheDragon [2017-10-20 01:55:18 +0000 UTC]

is dat taco a reference to US? -w- me and my overclouded obsessed mind of undertale XD 

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Shadowlion2 [2017-08-17 01:25:38 +0000 UTC]

I tell myself that every night too, Sans... 

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FNAFERZ [2017-05-01 21:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Is GMN Good Mythical Night? Good Mythical Morning reference!

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ZaCloud In reply to FNAFERZ [2017-05-02 03:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Huh, I actually forget what the reference was supposed to be (Good Music Network maybe?). I do like Rhett and Link though. XD

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blueflower1994 [2016-07-25 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this page definitely holds a strong feeling or morbidity. Why are the Froggits so few? 0.0 Are they being picked off? Now Sans has told us just how important Papyrus's innocent nature is to him.....something tells me things are about to get really bad. "See? I'm always there with you, even if you can't see me!" Why do I feel like that line holds some minor foreshadowing? Oh my goodness, I'm on the edge of my seat! I hope we see the villian soon. He's like a dark storm that's been building up! 😖

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ZaCloud In reply to blueflower1994 [2016-07-26 02:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Eeee! I always appreciate how much you analyze my approach to this story. X3

I was tempted to move things along faster, but I think the key to a convincing threat is slowly building up their ominousness. Like a looming shadow.

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blueflower1994 In reply to ZaCloud [2016-07-26 03:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh you certainly do a good job on that! I can feel the bittersweetness of these skelebro fluffy moments! "A looming shadow" is definitely a good way to describe it!!

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ABAGAcom [2016-07-25 16:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Part 3 also? this is gonna be a long night of voice acting

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ZaCloud In reply to ABAGAcom [2016-07-26 02:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I was just thinking about you, dude. Wondering how you were doing with that. That's really cool that you still seem interested in dubbing this.

Feel free to go at your own pace, of course. I'm looking forward to the result! :3

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TicciTammy [2016-07-25 11:49:48 +0000 UTC]

how do you draw anatomy so good?! also the last panel with Sans sleeping on the couch is adorable.

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ZaCloud In reply to TicciTammy [2016-07-25 12:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks. :3

Just lots of observation and practice. It helps that I took Figure Drawing class in school too.
The key is to just find good live-person references, familiarize yourself with proportions, and just keep drawing until you start remembering how everything works. Then you can do it on your own with more confidence.

I'm so glad you like that panel. Even I agree it turned out really good. X3
I'm gonna release it on its own in a bit; it's small, but I'm sure some folks might like it. :3

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twitchychu [2016-07-25 10:49:09 +0000 UTC]

.....

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ZaCloud In reply to twitchychu [2016-07-25 10:50:45 +0000 UTC]

.....?

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