Comments: 77
InvaderAshley122 [2017-03-29 02:34:12 +0000 UTC]
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SO CUTE!!!!!!
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TrueOkamiAmaterasu [2016-07-22 03:14:48 +0000 UTC]
As I always say, opinions are like dicks, it's fine for you to have one and be proud of it but do NOT go slapping me in the face with it or shoving it down my throat! don't let the haters get you down sweetheart, this is a lovely story
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Jacelyn4565 [2016-06-23 08:01:10 +0000 UTC]
<3 love it other than spelling errors do not change anything.<3
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Lydia-the-insane [2016-06-15 01:49:26 +0000 UTC]
Aww, this is so cute!
I said that out loud and my mom's boyfreind started asking questions cause we're all at dinner.
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Randomfoxgirl [2016-04-27 22:25:01 +0000 UTC]
Is something sexy about to go on?~ *Eyebrow wiggle*
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WolfToastStar [2015-08-16 11:03:51 +0000 UTC]
that was really good ^^
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PGXPG5NAF [2015-07-14 13:37:48 +0000 UTC]
Yess
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VoidStalker23 [2015-02-21 21:03:15 +0000 UTC]
Fucking disgusting.
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VoidStalker23 In reply to PGXPG5NAF [2015-07-14 14:48:15 +0000 UTC]
It's on the Internet, so of course I read it, forcing myself against my own will. I also you're one of those faggy fans of some hyper edgy emo killer.
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PGXPG5NAF In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-07-15 11:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Idiot, no one, leave me alone now please.
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Suki-Ai-Shiawase In reply to PGXPG5NAF [2015-08-05 23:22:44 +0000 UTC]
wow you people have problems... well then again.. if you think about it.. don't we all. opinions are opinions people. just because someone dose not like the same things as you dose not give you the right to get upset at them for it.respect one another's decisions.
I mean seriously?! you people sure do like your rough commenting...
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VoidStalker23 In reply to PGXPG5NAF [2015-07-15 16:58:16 +0000 UTC]
Why are you leaving so soon. I was about to poison your tea?
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PGXPG5NAF In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-07-15 17:26:45 +0000 UTC]
I am a fucking demon... And how the fuck did you know I love tea?
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PGXPG5NAF In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-07-15 23:42:12 +0000 UTC]
XDD i am dying XDD idiot! go die in a hole you bastard XD
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VoidStalker23 In reply to PGXPG5NAF [2015-07-16 03:16:18 +0000 UTC]
Wait, your asshole which reeks of shite?
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Iamcreepypastaqueen In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-03-21 02:43:45 +0000 UTC]
There is no need for such, harsh criticism my friend. If you do not enjoy such a thing then do not read it just so you rude about it. That just makes YOU look like, for lack of a better word, a douche bag.
By the way this part is to the author, very well done for a work in progress, there is slight need for little improvement, but still good none the less.
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VoidStalker23 In reply to Iamcreepypastaqueen [2015-03-21 16:50:16 +0000 UTC]
Harsh criticism is what leads to improvement. Being a douchebag is a hobby besides writing.
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Iamcreepypastaqueen In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-03-26 02:35:12 +0000 UTC]
I concur, but a one word sentence is not constructive criticism. It's being a little mean. And if you find something disgusting, why read it?
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VoidStalker23 In reply to Iamcreepypastaqueen [2015-03-26 22:32:06 +0000 UTC]
Isn't that the whole purpose of writing stories? If shared on a site like this, obvious other people will read it and will give their input on it. No matter how harsh or ass-kissing it, and if the writer acts as if he can't take criticism, then the reader will advise other readers to stay as far as possible from the reader. And by your title, you are a major offender.
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Iamcreepypastaqueen In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-03-27 03:38:26 +0000 UTC]
I don't understand what you mean by offender. But I will admit you have a good point there.
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Iamcreepypastaqueen In reply to VoidStalker23 [2015-03-29 21:14:20 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry. I wasn't trying to be offended! I was just trying to say your criticism was a little.... Blunt seems to be the word I'm looking for. Again I am SO sorry I came across as that!
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VoidStalker23 In reply to Iamcreepypastaqueen [2015-03-30 20:26:21 +0000 UTC]
Again, you do not have to apologize for your previous misdeeds. Just as long as you learn from your past mistakes.
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SoulSweets [2014-12-26 22:37:50 +0000 UTC]
you're right still room for improvement but still good all the same. I enjoyed it.
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Ask-Italy-Vee [2014-11-01 23:26:12 +0000 UTC]
((Can I do a helpful criticizm on this peice of beautyy?))
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Invader-Cookie [2013-12-13 04:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Damn, it was just getting- eh never mind it was good o3o
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StephanoIssexy [2013-11-05 02:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Pure amazingness.
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DarthZaDr [2013-08-31 01:06:23 +0000 UTC]
Very sweet and charming; it certainly put a smile on my face
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gohany1 [2013-05-29 22:22:13 +0000 UTC]
ahhh to cute!
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CheeseArty [2013-05-12 08:04:51 +0000 UTC]
If I explode from my fangirliness, you're responsible for hosing me off the walls.
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Annaley [2012-08-17 11:24:24 +0000 UTC]
" the project can wait " " lets work on this one"
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