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Moopleaf [2009-11-25 16:59:05 +0000 UTC]
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WOO! FIRST-CRITIQUE-EVAH!
just to let you know,the stuff I am giving you little pointers on or am saying needs work,I couldn't do,so I probably shouldn't be saying it.
THIS PICTURE IS AWESOME. the lighting/mood/glow is great, and the background is sweet!For some reason, I love Harvey's belt.And his goggles rock.
KAY CRITIQUE TIME.
the perspective seems slightly off,like between Harvey and the hammer, and his hand looks a bit odd wrapped around the handle, kinda looks like a mitten.
also, his shoulder looks kinda low,(or-his-neck-is-a-bit-long) if he was holding something that heavy he would scrunching his shoulder up more.
DONE-ALREADY!
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Zakeno In reply to Moopleaf [2009-11-27 18:22:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the crit Moop! C8
yeah most of the reason his anatomy is funky is because I'm still working on getting it more cat like. xD;;
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AriusWinter [2009-12-02 00:11:04 +0000 UTC]
goggles are the best thing you can put on your fursona. Seriously.
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Zakeno In reply to AriusWinter [2009-12-02 00:30:47 +0000 UTC]
Too bad he isn't my fursona. D:
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AriusWinter In reply to Zakeno [2009-12-02 01:13:50 +0000 UTC]
YOU STORYBOARD THE HECK OUTTA THAT SO I CAN READ IT, K? XD
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hannahthe-HOST [2009-11-26 23:42:23 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT.
so awesome~ ♥♥
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ravenstar100 [2009-11-26 02:22:37 +0000 UTC]
AWSOMENESS. 8D Must draw your request!
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Zakeno In reply to ravenstar100 [2009-11-27 18:26:15 +0000 UTC]
yessss. <33
Thanks!
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Moopleaf [2009-11-25 16:59:52 +0000 UTC]
sorry about the lack of spaces on the critique. STUPID 100 WORD MINIMUM! D:<
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Zakeno In reply to Moopleaf [2009-11-27 18:27:12 +0000 UTC]
LOL that's fine. xD
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L91 [2009-11-25 03:39:20 +0000 UTC]
love him already. He looks pretty bad ass. I wouldn't want to run into him in a dark ally with nothing but a brick wall and a dumpster in that said ally. Know what I mean?
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L91 In reply to Zakeno [2009-11-25 16:36:53 +0000 UTC]
awwwwww. I would give him a hug if he fell over.
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Zakeno In reply to L91 [2009-11-27 18:31:07 +0000 UTC]
And he would be embarrassed. XDD
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L91 In reply to Zakeno [2009-11-27 18:59:57 +0000 UTC]
aw, why would he be embarrassed?
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Zakeno In reply to L91 [2009-11-28 19:34:46 +0000 UTC]
Harvey: Hugs = unmanly plz. D:
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L91 In reply to Zakeno [2009-11-29 18:19:12 +0000 UTC]
XD ohhh
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cali-cal [2009-11-25 00:39:08 +0000 UTC]
NICE!
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cali-cal In reply to Zakeno [2009-11-25 06:37:27 +0000 UTC]
jour welcome
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ZipDog11 [2009-11-25 00:29:24 +0000 UTC]
Sexy Harvey is made of ICE CREAM.
e-e That hammer is heavy you know.
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Zakeno In reply to ZipDog11 [2009-11-25 01:08:08 +0000 UTC]
He always has the hammer's handle on the ground since he can't actually lift it. xD
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ZipDog11 In reply to Zakeno [2009-11-25 04:29:12 +0000 UTC]
XD But the goggles, THEY'RE CHICK MAGNETS.
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ZipDog11 In reply to Zakeno [2009-11-25 18:05:43 +0000 UTC]
XDDDD Other Mother face.
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Wolf-Terrier [2009-11-25 00:08:05 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! The lighting, the background the...everything! @3@
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Zakeno In reply to TheDemonDM22 [2009-11-25 00:02:40 +0000 UTC]
HArvey: AND YOU KNOW IT. ;D
Thanks! cx
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