Comments: 65
KardoZ0 In reply to ZakkVanBurace [2010-07-12 04:11:24 +0000 UTC]
I will try it out!!! Was I too hard on you???
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KardoZ0 In reply to ZakkVanBurace [2010-07-12 16:20:48 +0000 UTC]
If you want to get back on me I have 1 deviation where you can go badgirl on!!!
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PhyroPhantom [2010-05-06 00:15:28 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I'm not quite sure where to start with this picture, there are so many things about it that really strike me. The character is really well designed, and is drawn with amazing form and style. The anatomy is great, and the lines are very polished and smooth. The color choices for the piece are overall very nice, and they really give a feeling of "blue", and calm. The shading is very well done, and it really gives life to the piece with a nice sparkling effect. The water effects are very nice, as well. The seamless, flowing color really makes the water look like a liquid next to the solid lines of the character, and the shading and highlights on it looks strikingly realistic. The bubbles around the picture look really good and bring a new level of depth to the picture. The final bottom layer may be simple, but it completes the color scheme perfectly, and the foreground has plenty in it to distract from its simplicity.
The character design itself is also very well done, and unique. The outfit is perhaps a bit simple, but it gets the effect across nonetheless.
Some suggestions for improvement would perhaps be that, while the water effects are very good as they are, the author is correct in that they could be elaborated on a bit more. The drawing could be a little more dynamic, but the current pose seems to suit the character. The background could also be expanded on a little bit, but other than that this is a really great picture, and I think the artist did a great job. ^_^
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PhyroPhantom In reply to ZakkVanBurace [2010-05-06 15:51:23 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! ^_^ Well I don't really expect to get critiques on my art either, but one of my friends gave a very good one for one of my animations and it really made my day. When I saw this picture on the top of a deviation stack, it really struck me, and when I saw you were asking for critique I thought I should take the time and give one. ^_^
You're welcome, it was fun to do and I hope it helps! ^_^
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pathetictastic [2010-05-11 19:16:07 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! I think the water looks great. The only thing I'd say is distractingly off is the pattern on the shirt. The lines should be changing with the curves of her body. [link]
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flynfreako [2010-05-08 18:32:04 +0000 UTC]
ooo i love the colors *o*
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jeffreyboutte9 [2010-05-06 18:47:40 +0000 UTC]
Great work.Keep up the great work.
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Lengleth In reply to ZakkVanBurace [2010-05-09 11:22:44 +0000 UTC]
xDDDDD
tienes que dibujar mรกs personajes del comic.
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Deih [2010-05-06 13:59:26 +0000 UTC]
wooow al final hiciste algo bastante chulo! ^^ sigue asรญ : D
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KingOfLoonies [2010-05-06 06:30:22 +0000 UTC]
The different shades if blue fit each other just perfectly. Mesmerising.
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ZakkVanBurace In reply to Everyday-Grind-Comic [2010-05-06 13:22:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much, Ben! ^^
I've done all my works with mouse XD,well, almost all, 'cause my friend has a tablet, and sometimes I draw with it qhen I'm in his home XDD
I hope I get a tablet for my birthday *.*
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FireLeo05 [2010-05-06 01:46:18 +0000 UTC]
me gusto como te quedo, demasiado azul XDDD jeje
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ZakkVanBurace In reply to FireLeo05 [2010-05-06 13:24:10 +0000 UTC]
jeje gracias! de eso se trataba jejej
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ZakkVanBurace In reply to HeIrouis [2010-05-06 13:36:53 +0000 UTC]
haha really? thank you ^^
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brooke9000 [2010-05-06 00:34:12 +0000 UTC]
I love all of the blue !
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