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Zanessa4ver — Breaking Dawn Wedding
Published: 2011-08-12 15:40:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 3258; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 438
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" I´ve been waiting a century to marry you, Miss Swan. "...
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" Yeah, I´m ready. "
<3 gosh gotta love this couple
Are you just as excited as I am? Why can´t it be November already
Tell me what you think about it
Dedicated to a lovely site www.robstendreams.com [link]
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Awww thank you so much. That´s so sweet
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Oh Bella!
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This critique has been left on behalf of #Graphite-Gods as previously requested.
Thank you for providing the link to the reference. It's clear you have been very faithful to the original photo in your interpretation of Bella and Edward's wedding scene. I think your portrait is both tender and beautiful. I'm not sure what I think of the black bands above and below, it does make the image appear cinematic, which is fitting.
I'll start with a key concern which strikes me on looking at the photo, and then comparing it with your drawing. There is only one absolute bright area in the photo, the white collar of Edward's shirt and everything else is tonally darker than his collar. If you look at the highlights on his neck in the photo, these are darker than the collar. In your drawing, the highlights are nearly as bright as the white of the collar. This is really only a concern if you were aiming for a photo-realistic result. If we look at Bella in your drawing, the highlights give her a radiance that is lacking in the photo - and they say a bride should look radiant on her wedding day
A concern about these highlights on Bella's face is how both sides of the face are highlighted, wheras only the left side of her face is affected by light in the photo. I think the right side of her face would benefit from having the brightness toned down a little.
You've captured Bella's eyes really well, and I can see in the photo how a lot of detail is lost in that area and hard to pick out, and you've done a credible job considering this. I like that you've added shade to the whites of her eyes and these look tonally correct compared to the photo (ditto for not making the teeth too bright). This is an area where people often mistakenly keep things bright/white and it can look so wrong in a drawing.
You've interpreted her little whisps of hair really well and the dark tones you've used are most effective. I think her ear needs to be tonally darker as that's an area in the shade.
You've done well on capturing Edward. I can appreciate how this might have been tricky as his figure is quite out of focus in the photo.
There is very little more that I could critique in this as you have done a commendable portrait and you've captured Bella's beauty so well. Well done.
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thank you so much you guys. I understand what you mean! We´re on the same age here. My scanner made it a little bit too bright for my taste. the original, darker version is already framed 
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You're very welcome. That happens a lot with scanners and it makes sense that you would know where to put the highlights in the first place, considering how skilled you are. I messed up my last submitted drawing by reducing the brightness too much in order to match the highlights on the scanned faces with my drawing ... I didn't realise how it had darkened everything else at the same time and had made even the lightest of pencil strokes look dark. It's a tricky business trying to reproduce your drawings faithfully. So I can definitely relate to what you've said.
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scanners are great but they can change the actual drawing - and that sucks big time!
well thank you again for ur critique. I appreciate it
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This work is in the #Graphite-Gods folder marked as awaiting critique. If you would still like to receive a critique on this, would you mind posting a link to the reference used? Thank you
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Yes thank you so much 
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Thanks, but it's a link to the wrong pic. I'm guessing you've drawn them a few times
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oh and here is the link *hihi* [link]
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Oh I am soooo sorry. I do have the pic somewhere on my computer. well this picture is not exactly the onbut it is very close to it
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trillion times better than mine
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Awww thank you so much. Well it´s not the bestest...but I´m content with it
I konw.. I want it to be november...but without the cold, snowy days
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Awwww:Aww: THank you so much. That means a lot to me 
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oh du bist auch aus deutschland xD jaaa voll nervig -.- auch wenn ich maanche szenen ein bisschen "übertrieben" finde twilight ist und bleibt einfach geeil
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Scheiß auf übertrieben. Als erstes ist übertrieben,dass die einen GOTT als Edward ausgesucht haben. Ich meine...wer auf dieser WElt ist soooooooooo perfekt?! Awww ich freu mich schon auf November!! noch einen Monat :Aww:
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mhh robert pattison is für mich jetzt aber kein gott... aber er sieht schon hammer gut aus - solange er das hemd anlässt xD
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hahaha xD adonis^^ mir ist er einfach zu bleich
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awwww thank u guys
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Your welcome
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Ummmm no it´s just normal graphite pencils
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