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Published: 2012-09-20 16:41:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2912; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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TemptressCredits:
Model: By
Background: My Own
Rose Vines: By
Roses: By
Raven: Renderosity Illona
Rest all rendered, purchased or painted by me.
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Comments: 32
First I'd like to say I thought this picture was beautiful. As I continued to look at the picture I could imagine seeing a vampire or werewolf suddenly jumping into this image.
Next I took notice on how the background has for in it, but none of the fog has settledonto the ground in that room. So I didn't like that. It didn't look real enough. However I love the details of the dress. How it looks so silky and smooth. I also love the details of the rose vines crawling up the wall. I also love how the sunlight is filtering into the room through the windows.
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Since you asked for critique on this, I'll do my best to be helpful~
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The first thing that I notice is that the contrast is off, and the model is a tad bright in general. There is much more contrast on the model/hair/crow than on the background.
Also, the overall color on the model doesn't blend her in. I think maybe a simple photo filter (the colored ones) would help. If you know how, you can use a clipping mask for a hue/saturation adjustment layer and edit the colors individually. My guess would be less yellow and darker blues would help :3
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Thank you so much!
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you`re welcome!
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Thank you so much dear. 
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very welcome!
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Thank you very much!
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