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Published: 2005-08-17 04:21:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 25; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Again, Crimson. He is coming right along. I'm pretty proud.Related content
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hey I like this guy a lot! he's really cute! Since you wanted a critique, let me see what I can say...
Make the tail a lot thicker, and make the clumps of fur closer together so they're not so spikey and choppy. Make his feet shorter, so his hind-paws are closer under his knees while he's sitting down. His ears are cute! I like how long and pointed they are! It might help to make them a bit rounder at the base. And his little squinty smile is just adorable, i love those eyes, but make his head a little flatter on top to give it better depth. add a bit of a wrist to that front paw on the ground so it looks like he has better support.
I like this guy's markings a lot! he's a cute little guy and i love how you made his fur! I hope my advice wasn't too overbearing, and even if it was, it's your leisure to take what you want from it and leave the rest. hope my comment helped!
~Dana
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Ok, thanks bunches! I'll definately take some of this into consideration. Some I might not because parts are supposed to look the way they are, like the legs being thin, though I'll probably try it anyways to see if I like it. The tail and head critique was the most appreciated. The head's been nothing but trouble. It's taken the most work so far.
Thanks again. I actually will try out each of your suggestions even if I think they might not be what I want, cuz you never know.
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