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Zaratops — andie, my dear
Published: 2009-02-06 05:41:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1018; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 13
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andie my dear,
you are a thousand envelopes full of sunshine.
covered in 2 cent multi-colored stamps.
there’s something about you that makes me warm inside.

andie my dear,
you are a crack in the window that lets the rain come in.
in tiny teardrops with silver rims that run down crooked snail trails.
and land like cool complacency on my forehead.

andie my dear,
your smile is the sky looked at through a clean windshield.
clear and full of things to drive towards.
let’s go until there is no more road to follow.

andie my dear,
you’re one in a million faces on the street that no one will notice.
but you’re the face i look for when i feel like the world is a lonely place.
your lonely heart can keep mine company.

andie my dear,
L O V and E aren't enough.
how can i spell what i feel with only 27 letters in the alphabet?
you are beyond words.

andie my dear,
you are priceless and something i can’t afford.
but i know the five-finger discount.
and i’d paint my hands red for you.

andie my dear,
do you remember the days when we were young?
you had plans to build a beautiful boat to sail away on.
you promised to take me with, remember?

andie my dear,
you were never afraid of life, don’t be afraid of yourself.
there is more in you than a mountain could hold.
and nobody has to know it for you to move forward.

andie my dear,
you are more beautiful than you will ever understand.
no mirror can show you what i can see in your heart.
no person can tell you that you aren’t lovely in every way.
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Comments: 24

Nullibicity [2013-02-11 03:14:16 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully crafted. Each line exposes more soul and heart, while slowly taking down defenses. It was truly a pleasure to read! I especially loved the last two stanzas... but the whole poem was amazing. I enjoyed watching it all unfold, seeing your unique descriptions. I applied each image where I could to try and play out the story to the fullest extent... it was beautiful. The words in your description box then seemed to just tie it to a perfect end.
All I know, is that if I ever received such a gorgeous poem from someone who showed they knew me better than I knew myself... I would hang on and never let them go! If you did, indeed, give this to someone, I hope they received it very well! I also hope you two are happy together

Thanks for sharing! As I said before: I enjoyed the read.

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Amux [2009-05-03 14:11:55 +0000 UTC]

hhehehe
lookieee lookiee
i acme back to read it again many timez now
i must comment again

i so Love it

it just makez me feel happYYy n warm

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Zaratops In reply to Amux [2009-05-03 18:04:40 +0000 UTC]

lol, awesome. thanks. xD

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NoireAnge [2009-04-06 19:44:14 +0000 UTC]

This andie is quite lucky to have you, seeing from this poem

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Zaratops In reply to NoireAnge [2009-04-06 23:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks very much.

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NoireAnge In reply to Zaratops [2009-04-07 10:21:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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FinalxWords [2009-03-07 16:25:38 +0000 UTC]

this is exactly how I feel about my best friend
your style of writing is beautiful!

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Zaratops In reply to FinalxWords [2009-03-07 18:44:18 +0000 UTC]

aw. thank you! (;

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Mars-1348 [2009-03-03 04:57:30 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute and wonderful im so glad i found it
in all seriousness this made my day brighter
i dont know who you are my friend
but i wish you and your Andie nothing but happiness and sunshine

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Zaratops In reply to Mars-1348 [2009-03-03 05:03:10 +0000 UTC]

aw. i'm so glad you like it. ^^
thanks!

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ChibiChan8512 [2009-03-03 04:54:34 +0000 UTC]

this poem is my new favorite poem of all time. fabulous job! i absolutely love it!

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Zaratops In reply to ChibiChan8512 [2009-03-03 04:58:51 +0000 UTC]

aww. that made my day. <3
thanks so much!

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moonology1 [2009-03-03 01:17:55 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe this doesn't have more views or favorites, this is completely wonderful. Amazing.

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Zaratops In reply to moonology1 [2009-03-03 04:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! <3

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Flymo-Girl [2009-03-03 00:33:05 +0000 UTC]

"you are priceless and something i can’t afford.
but i know the five-finger discount.
and i’d paint my hands red for you."

I lovelovelove that part the most
Beautiful~

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Zaratops In reply to Flymo-Girl [2009-03-03 04:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Thank you so much!
I wasn't sure if anyone would get the "paint my hands red" part. It's been in a couple of my poems. :3

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Shimichan [2009-03-02 18:58:45 +0000 UTC]

"
andie my dear,
you’re one in a million faces on the street that no one will notice.
but you’re the face i look for when i feel like the world is a lonely place.
your lonely heart can keep mine company.

"

WoW!!!!!!!!!
Totally made me look again and again and read it atleast twice
Amazing.

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Zaratops In reply to Shimichan [2009-03-03 05:24:27 +0000 UTC]

aww.
Thank you so much!

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Amux [2009-03-02 15:52:49 +0000 UTC]

you are a thousand envelopes full of sunshine.
covered in 2 cent multi-colored stamps.

you are a crack in the window that lets the rain come in.
in tiny teardrops with silver rims that run down crooked snail trails

wOwiEeEEeEE...thiz iz so..impressively eXpressed....and .REFLECTING...

andiee must EXACTLY be all of thiz...

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Zaratops In reply to Amux [2009-03-03 05:40:59 +0000 UTC]

aww.
thanks so much!

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simplysamwise [2009-02-16 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]


(I won't mess this up with unnecessary words.)

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Zaratops In reply to simplysamwise [2009-02-16 03:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Aww.

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kittako [2009-02-06 08:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, very touching

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Zaratops In reply to kittako [2009-02-06 15:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. <3

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