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Published: 2017-09-01 19:47:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2037; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 12
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Here is the old version of this pic. Man was this painful but I think it was worth fixing it in the end. I think I improved it "Quite a bit". Tell me what you think! I want to know. Edit Note: fixed some spacing face issues because it made it look a bit funny. Fixed the "Too much blue background" and added some red to her hair to bring back the color.Related content
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Personally I liked the original one better, and here is why!
While her body is more fitting in this one (where the original had a bigger upper body), I feel like her face is throwing me off
Compared to the original one, her nose seems really flat as it seems like the tip of her nose is almost as far out as her nasal bridge, this is most likely due to shading, but I still wanted to mention it.
While I like her eyes, I feel like the rest of her expression is really forced, her smile especially. Humans can do 2 kind of smiles, a genuine and a forced one.
With the forced one, the only thing that changes is the mouth going from | to )
With the genuine one, you cheeks and eyes follows, usually making you squint and have little wrinkles to the sides of the eyes.
Just and example:
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I know that in the original, she is using her eyes either, but I feel like she is smirking more than smiling.
I also enjoyed enjoy her hair more in the original aswell, this is ofcourse more up to taste, but I think it looked really good with her hair looking the same as it does in the anime (atleast the hairline).
And last but not least, what happened to the lighting of the room? xD It went from crispy relaxed, to foggy bright? It makes all the colors seem more bland and blue?
This is just my thoughts on the matter, it's still a great drawing
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I actually already know what you mean by "the whole face that is bugging me". It is actually a mistake I made with the lip thickness and the distance between all the facial features including the whole height of the face. I am actually editing that at the moment. I see what you mean with the "It's too blue" I will fix that. Editing this picture removed some of the upper body size so that is why it probably looks a bit smaller. I will see if I can fix that too. Will do some minor color corrections, like the hair. The whole editing process really screwed me around. That is why the facial features looked all spaced incorrectly and the body size too.
Thanks I really like some good feedback. I will probably post the edited version a bit later after I give it some more TLC.
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You are welcome c: I am glad my explanation wasn't just a blur xD When I wrote it I found it hard to describe what I meant
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Tell me if it feels better now. I already updated it. I understood exactly what you meant. The problem was she was suppose to be pouting in a smile way and painting over the existing face was madness. xD It took everything out of proportion and shape.
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Yeah! Her face looks more natural now 
Her hair color is also looking nice, not as pale as before.
Actually all the colors looks less blue xD Now it's more like a light is on in the room rather than it being hotboxed
I think you did a great job!
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Yup I tried to fix everything I somehow overlooked. Guess I was blind, since I only noticed all that stuff and the stuff you mentioned after I posted it. xD Well fixed now. Don't know what I will fix next. But I'm fixing some of my older art works that just need adjustments and touch ups While at the same time doing new artworks in better quality.
Man I am really going at it with all I have for the sake of getting myself to that Extra Ordinary Pro level of detail and quality. Still a lot to do xP
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I call it the "perfection" curse, the name is just funny seeing as I find myself missing key mistakes if I have worked with it for a long time, so you will only notice them if you go away from said project for a while, or get someone to reveiw it.
Your eyes have been used to look at something for so long, even a checklist won't help you see the mistakes
Excited to see what you will be fixing next! I will be sure to pop in again 
You will get there! And if you ask me I think you are well on your way, but it's a long road!
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