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ZeeZeeMonster — Umbrella Bird v.2
Published: 2007-04-06 02:52:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1272; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 55
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So, after gave me some constructive criticism on my original version of umbrella-bird [link] , I decided to do a little lightening up of the umbrella and some getting rid of dark lines and all. I was going to just upload this version as an edit, but it seems that there are some people who like that version, so this is a version two (kind of like what I did with the Liliana Repaints)You get to decide which you prefer!
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Comments: 10
this piece is gorgeous
love the colors and the hatching effect on the clouds
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Very nice. I really like this version. You completely understood what I was saying. The only crit I could give you here is to better analyze your light source in the future. You see how the light is coming from the top left of the scene, casting highlights on the umbrella. Wouldn't it also cast shadow on the girl just a little?
No need to change this one just for that minor detail, I don't think it takes away from the piece enough to bother with it. Great improvement, really good work. Keep it up!
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Thanks for your help 
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this is adorable, nice work
I agree, I think this is better than the original one!!
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