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RecklessKaiser [2010-03-04 20:01:33 +0000 UTC]
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In my opinion, you should request critiques more often in your Sonic Art too, I don't mean you do it all the time but once in a while will be actually good. There are several things I'd like to point out about it and this time I'm glad you actually requested a critique, so let's see what we have this time:
First of all, I'd like to say how much your style to draw female characters is improving, I love the way you drew ~ambar-hedgehog 's character! My favourite parts are the body and her legs, they're very well proportionate. Very nice work on these, Lisa! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up - "/> The hands, as usual, came out very well, they look so natural! Maybe you only would have to keep an eye open on her left hand, it looks a little bigger than the right one; but I guess it's just due to the perspective. Even with that, both of them look great.
Then, your SA style looks pretty good; for me, it looks official as I said before, but I think you could get new ideas for you own SA style if you took a look to some tutorials, like this one e.g. [link] I think it could be useful to you.
Finally, the background and the color scheme you chose for it, perfectly fit her! It reminds me to a game card where you can find all the info about the characer, therefore I like it a lot. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="16" height="16" alt="" title="Horns - "/>
So this drawing is another proof, that no matter what you draw: human, anthro or Sonic; you're on the right track of becoming a great artist, I can't wait to see more of these prizes in your stunning styles! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Peace - "/>
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neo-magnus In reply to RecklessKaiser [2010-03-08 17:54:18 +0000 UTC]
denadas
XD ya era hora q dijiera algo en una de sus criticas
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zelestials In reply to RecklessKaiser [2010-03-05 00:00:15 +0000 UTC]
Hurr, I know I usually don't, huh? xD Must be weird critting something like this, but I'm glad you've got something to say! lol
Hmm, yeah you're right it does look a little big. I have a bad habit of making hands two different sizes sometimes, so I'll keep that in mind. xD <3
And okay. owo I actually used that one to learn SA style, but I never really looked over it too much, just for the basics. xD So I'll make sure to do that again. o3o
eee thanks. ;w; <333
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neo-magnus [2010-03-08 08:24:35 +0000 UTC]
good work
I liked it
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zelestials In reply to ambar-hedgehog [2010-03-05 04:51:39 +0000 UTC]
eee I'm so glad you like it! <33
And yes, I was totally in your head. 8( lmao <3
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SunChails [2010-03-04 13:43:32 +0000 UTC]
Your style and art are improving! But maybe you could make her left fingers a little shorter...
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zelestials In reply to SunChails [2010-03-04 23:52:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. lol <3 And alright, I'll keep that in mind. <3
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Morgan-the-Hedgehog [2010-03-04 04:55:46 +0000 UTC]
Eeeee! I love SA style. It's so awesome!
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