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Published: 2004-08-27 13:52:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description The light wind breeze,
Across my face,
Where ever I look,
There is empty space.

The chill it produces,
Upon my skin,
Is soothing,
Is calming,
Is relaxing within.

The breeze becomes stronger,
And is now producing rain,
The sky it turns darker,
As I now feel inner pain.

Alone in my space,
And brought to my knees,
This was all started,
By just a light breeze.
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Comments: 4

Pure-Dax [2005-04-04 08:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Great Work, keep it up

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Zelleon In reply to Pure-Dax [2005-04-04 15:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much

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Elmare [2004-08-27 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]

well written

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Zelleon In reply to Elmare [2004-08-27 19:19:32 +0000 UTC]

thanx , nice avi by the way

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