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Zelleon — Despise

Published: 2004-09-25 16:28:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description As I look,
Into your eyes,
I see all the things,
Which you despise.

A heart of darkness,
A soul of black,
All presence that's near you,
Is in fear of attack.

You know not fear,
Yet wonder this Earth,
The day of Judgement,
Occured on your birth.

A force so evil,
One of which I despise,
Your mind it is trapped,
In a life filled with lies.
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Comments: 11

raven16 [2004-09-27 17:18:39 +0000 UTC]

i don't really get whats its saying..but i really like it^.6

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Zelleon In reply to raven16 [2004-09-29 15:32:46 +0000 UTC]

heh heh... thanks

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KosuHime [2004-09-27 09:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Love the whole poem... it "connects" with me in some "sick-twisted" way >.> I adore the second and third verse though, they just... I dunno, I just really like them ^_^;; Another awesome poem mi dear

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-29 15:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-29 19:01:40 +0000 UTC]

!!!

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Zih [2004-09-26 16:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, cptn Z, who was this one for? The antiChrist? Liked it!!
Hope you are alright!! Miss u (and pirate too *MEGA *)
Take care!!!

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Zelleon In reply to Zih [2004-09-29 15:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I'm fine luv.. u ok?.... Take care also

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KosuHime In reply to Zih [2004-09-27 09:29:42 +0000 UTC]

...I was told I was the antichrist more than once

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Zih In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-27 17:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Neat.

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Zih In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-27 17:02:55 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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KosuHime In reply to Zih [2004-09-27 21:13:57 +0000 UTC]

But of course *smile: sparkle sparkle*

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piratewh0re [2004-09-25 16:32:28 +0000 UTC]

oooooooooohhhhh.... shiny.... *licks t3h poem* great job ^_^ and MSN wont freakin' let me sign in!! It's pissing me off >_< But hell. -_-; Hope to talk to ya later, BUZAAH.

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Zelleon In reply to piratewh0re [2004-09-25 16:36:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks...i did it in less than 5mins ... create a new account, then send your old details to it.. ok

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