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Zelleon — It's Done

Published: 2004-09-02 18:10:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description You look around,
And feel that pain,
Forever knowin',
You where to blame.

The trigger you pulled,
Took a life away,
Yet you feel no regret,
To this very day.

The job,
It was done,
Without any remorce,
And still you are heartless,
A unforgiving,
Killing force.

Now people cry,
When they see your face,
As deep in your mind,
You know your a disgrace.
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Comments: 8

DarkInsaneRhi [2004-09-20 16:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Meh.. all I can say is 'Wowzer' o.o and fav it.. -cough-

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Zelleon In reply to DarkInsaneRhi [2004-09-20 17:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Thankies luv..

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DarkInsaneRhi In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-25 19:52:02 +0000 UTC]

o.o No problem

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KosuHime [2004-09-03 00:17:09 +0000 UTC]

I just adore the second verse... I don't know why, It just intrigues me in some way. The overall emotion of this is well put and..you rock..

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-03 15:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou ... some things you don't need a reason for liking i guess , wow... thats a big compliment to me (all the last sentence you wrote).. i really appreciate that

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raven16 [2004-09-02 22:59:37 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness^.^i think its cool......

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piratewh0re [2004-09-02 18:43:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow...I really like this. The trigger you pulled,
Took a life away,
Yet you feel no regret,
To this very day.
thats my favorite part...This is really well written ^_^

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Zelleon In reply to piratewh0re [2004-09-03 14:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou V.much

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