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Zelleon — Leave

Published: 2004-09-03 19:33:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 272; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 14
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Description As I drown in my sorrows,
Tryin' to think it all through,
But in every memory,
There is a image of you.

I want you to leave,
But find it difficult to erase,
Every reminiscence,
With a resemblance of your face.

Yet your always here,
And it brings me such pain,
When I think of the day,
With the never-ending rain.

Now I can't help but cry,
At the thought of you breathe,
I just want one look,
Before you finally leave.
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Comments: 11

DarkInsaneRhi [2004-09-20 16:52:25 +0000 UTC]

>> oh fudge! I'm faving to much. grr.

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Ok this one I do love ALOT ALOT ALOT. It's beautifully sad, but powerfully sad. And it makes me wanna cry!

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Zelleon In reply to DarkInsaneRhi [2004-09-20 17:53:56 +0000 UTC]

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DarkInsaneRhi In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-25 20:00:58 +0000 UTC]

o.o I hope i'm doing the hug thing right.. lmao.

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raven16 [2004-09-04 19:07:26 +0000 UTC]

well then...i guess i was right..now i feel really dumb

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SatinRose [2004-09-04 10:38:31 +0000 UTC]

The emotion flowing from each verse is heartfelt and genuine. It captures the feeling perfectly.
great job...i really love this... *hugs and won't let go!* !

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Zelleon In reply to SatinRose [2004-09-04 17:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much...

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SatinRose In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-05 17:06:46 +0000 UTC]

oops! *amazed at how stupid self is!* *blush

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KosuHime [2004-09-04 01:44:32 +0000 UTC]

This just about explains how everyone feels when someone leaves! So much emotion emits from each verse, and it flows so wonderfully from verse to verse.

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-04 10:21:58 +0000 UTC]

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-04 16:21:40 +0000 UTC]

I love your free style poetic mind love.

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-04 17:59:09 +0000 UTC]

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-04 19:23:18 +0000 UTC]

*aw's!!!*

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-04 20:00:09 +0000 UTC]

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-05 05:05:47 +0000 UTC]

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-05 14:00:27 +0000 UTC]

heh heh

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-05 15:30:31 +0000 UTC]

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