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Zelleon — Lines of Love
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Published: 2004-08-21 15:08:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 24
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Lines of loveCan come from above
And soon are spoken
Like the chirp of a dove
Some love comes
Some love goes
But my love for you
It always grows.
As when we were young
I had feelings for you,
And I could not wait for the day,
To say 'I do'.
Now we are older,
And when I look at you,
I always reminisce,
Of the things we went through.
As them lines of love
They came from above
And those chirping doves,
Where sent to resemble my love.
Comments: 8
very interesting, im not one to know poetry but this ish very prettyfull! ^-^ keep up the greatest writing
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lol ^-^ ur welcome lol I tried to do poetry wow did that not work lol
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heh heh...
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wow.. im slowly reading alll of ur poems, and they are really really really good.. i write too, but i dont think mine are good enough to put on here.. but wow, i really like urs, especially this one
----Squeaky
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err.. i did 53.. (im on break) in 48 days.. submitted my first one on August 20th, and did one each day after that..i dun no why tho lol 
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wow..thats short and sweet and simple..i like it a lot...its fresher than a lot of poems ive read recently...mine included 
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