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Published: 2004-09-16 18:39:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description Bullets are fired,
Crimson is shed,
It all becomes quiet,
Makes you think you are dead.

A rifle in hand,
A clip in the other,
Treat no man out there,
As you would to a brother.

You are in that land,
Where the reaper is living,
And he knows that your sins,
Where all unforgiving.

A shot is soon heard,
One second is all it took,
For your soul to end up,
Livin' in that black book.


             By Zak. B (Zelleon)
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Comments: 17

SatinRose [2004-09-23 19:49:53 +0000 UTC]

i love it - why are you so good!?
love you really!

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Zelleon In reply to SatinRose [2004-09-23 20:04:08 +0000 UTC]

...ya think im 'so good'.. thankyou .. i luv u 2

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SatinRose In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-25 07:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Zelleon In reply to SatinRose [2004-09-25 13:39:53 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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SatinRose In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-26 11:59:24 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Zelleon In reply to SatinRose [2004-09-28 18:08:45 +0000 UTC]

.. heh heh

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DementedDoll [2004-09-17 15:49:27 +0000 UTC]

^^ like it a lot...since the last few poems ive read by you...you got better O.o ...^^

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Zelleon In reply to DementedDoll [2004-09-17 18:57:18 +0000 UTC]

good.. thanks..

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Zih [2004-09-17 15:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Z, that was good!!! Really liked!!! You're getting better, my friend.
Hope to "see" you again soon, captain. and take care!

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Zelleon In reply to Zih [2004-09-17 18:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mi dear... .. glad you like it.. thankyou .. i hope to see you as well .. ttyl... and take care yourself

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KosuHime [2004-09-16 20:45:04 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of something The Cranberries would right X3 **Loves The Cranberries** Good theme, different from I what I've read so far. Awesome stuff love!

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-16 21:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Sweet (no pun intended )... thankies.. might try sumthin' diferent tomorrow... i don't know what im gonna type. thats why its called free style i guess... heh heh.. by the way:

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-17 09:37:23 +0000 UTC]

(no pun eh? Uh-huh, ya, sure, whatever )

The magic that is free style.. ya.. my only "free style" is like.. never....... erm... happy >.>;;

YAY 3 HUGS! live is goo~d

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Zelleon In reply to KosuHime [2004-09-17 18:38:50 +0000 UTC]

heh heh... YAY 3 CUDDLES.. .. live is now better

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KosuHime In reply to Zelleon [2004-09-18 23:40:01 +0000 UTC]

yay~

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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-09-16 18:46:27 +0000 UTC]

This is good. The lines are short and to the point. Just like a gun-shot...

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Zelleon In reply to Soldierofmisfortune [2004-09-16 20:42:43 +0000 UTC]

heh heh.. sorry i about that.. but the way you put it, thats a good thing

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raven16 [2004-09-16 18:45:48 +0000 UTC]

suckie

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Zelleon In reply to raven16 [2004-09-16 20:43:08 +0000 UTC]

huh?

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