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TheSkull31 [2013-09-30 22:24:42 +0000 UTC]
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Now, this is a picture! Excuse me while I critique this.
Vision: There's a lot of flowers in this photo and the model's dressed to kill, clearly. Also, this has a ton of quality, and that's more than good. Four and-a-half stars.
Originality: I haven't seen anyone try to make something quite like this yet, although I can imagine there are people out there with that idea in mind. Four and-a-half stars.
Technique: Like most of the photos I have critiqued, it's right place, right time, and it's just the right amount of both. Four and-a-half stars.
Impact: I gotta tell you, I'm spellbound by this. Not only does it have a beautiful touch to it, but it also has a hint of sexy. Four and-a-half stars.
Now where was I? Oh, yeah. Great job with the photo here! Keep it up!
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AllisonSohn [2013-09-30 20:26:24 +0000 UTC]
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Overall, the image is simply outstanding. The color choices are excellent; I love the way that the rich golden yellow compliments the deep blue, how the stark white plays against her flushed skin tones. Even texturally, this is a really strong piece; the way the soft white of the mist and the petals on her dress contrast with the tight ruffles on the marigolds is really very nice. The only thing that is taking me out of the image is the jewelry on her hair-line. They are the only non-organic thing in the image, and as such they draw un-necessary attention to themselves. Unless, of course, the photo is an advertisement for a Jeweler-- then I'd say Bravo, job well done! But as it is now, I look at the piece and wonder why she has earrings clipped into the hair on her forehead. It's just a bit too distracting, and I think it must be because they really are the only thin in the image with true geometry; hard edges and angles, and the only thing that isn't organic.
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zemotion In reply to AllisonSohn [2013-09-30 22:41:45 +0000 UTC]
Hi! Thanks for the critique. Regarding the jewelry, I can see why you find it out of place, I'd explain a little bit of my decision if it helps -- part of the reason it's placed there is because of how bare the model's face was compared to textures everywhere else in the image, it was in a way a means to balance the details. The other part was that Motherland Chronicles takes bits and pieces of inspirations from Russia. The kolts/temple jewelry is part of its 13th century fashion and I'd wanted to pay some homage (or you could see it as an Easter egg) in reference to the land of the Rus.
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MarcioKogan [2017-11-07 16:50:12 +0000 UTC]
beauty
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Denisemmanuel [2017-10-04 06:32:14 +0000 UTC]
Nice Portrait
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larryowens [2017-09-26 15:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Nice one
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WirrHead [2017-08-18 20:08:05 +0000 UTC]
nice hair!
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JohnyChamp [2017-05-23 09:36:45 +0000 UTC]
great
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GerrieDreamshop [2016-03-23 00:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Amazing textures in the background
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IDruDat [2014-10-26 15:44:51 +0000 UTC]
i guess im not the first to say the colors choice is superb. I also like her rosy cheeks,
Im a sucker for those...
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44aboriginny2014 [2014-10-25 20:42:55 +0000 UTC]
excellent use of colors, I like it
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rukibunny [2014-10-21 04:20:36 +0000 UTC]
The colors are superb!
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JBSWIF [2014-10-03 18:02:28 +0000 UTC]
Incredible piece
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Evil-Snake [2014-08-18 06:53:19 +0000 UTC]
so real!
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Wakta [2014-03-02 13:24:28 +0000 UTC]
it's incredible, it looks like paints...it's incredible.
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marshwood [2014-03-02 04:01:04 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to add your entire works to my favorites! I've bookmarked your page. I've instantly become a huge fan.
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Essuom [2014-02-25 04:05:01 +0000 UTC]
wow, i almost thought she was a painting
those lovely oil paintings <3
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cypherx [2014-01-18 14:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Truly you've mastered your craft. This has the feel of an oil painting at first glance. I think it's seriously magnificent and awesome to see that for some artists there's no cap on the level of progress they'll make in their lives and I'm glad I've been able to witness your evolution.
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Laplum [2014-01-11 21:35:02 +0000 UTC]
looks like a painting, wonderful..
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sophitschku [2013-12-27 16:41:20 +0000 UTC]
that's a truly amazing piece! I love your Motherland Chronicles series!
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ABartproductions [2013-12-26 12:51:39 +0000 UTC]
i have no words to this, it's incredible
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vetya [2013-12-24 07:25:32 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant!
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ProfessorBats [2013-12-06 21:09:26 +0000 UTC]
surreal and beautiful
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TianShi88 [2013-12-05 11:51:00 +0000 UTC]
looks like a CG,like it
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StephaniePearl [2013-11-29 17:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely aesthetically stunning, so emotive it brings a tear <3
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augenweide [2013-11-11 18:24:58 +0000 UTC]
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Artenyx [2013-11-03 23:59:09 +0000 UTC]
I find the mix of blue and orange with the floral arrangement to be very interesting in this image. Beautiful work!
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HawthornSword [2013-10-29 14:36:03 +0000 UTC]
The background and just the contrast of the colors are my favorite part here. Exquisite.
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sesam-is-open [2013-10-27 13:08:06 +0000 UTC]
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