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SincerelyGuin [2012-02-27 21:22:43 +0000 UTC]

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I really, really believe this is a stunning photo. All the colors pop in just the right ways and that is a fabulous model.

You did a very good job angling this photo so all emphasis would be on the right subject, her. Thats often overlooked (I personally fail at that prospect) and you excelled my dear e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

I want the leggings... and the boots.. and the hair... and bag... and shirt... and maybe the skirt.... Did I mention this photo makes you wanna be that girl? Just saying. Dang.

Keep up the good work!! Were all looking forward to it.

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Ay-pus [2012-02-27 21:08:04 +0000 UTC]

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I really don't like the picture. The model and the background doesn't fit at all. And I don't understand why you would have that titel for a picture like this.

I think her hair is overdone, and it gets way too much attention, wich make the photo way overdone in the middle. The background doesn't get enough attention, which is a big shame!

I would take the picture some where else, so it could fit the model just a bit more. And with the title, I would have taken the picture at a shool or something, so it would fit just a tiny bit. You might want to change the lightning or make some dept in the picture.

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acroboy99 [2012-02-27 20:15:38 +0000 UTC]

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Okay. First of all- Wow. Right now I'm speechless so just give me a second to regain my train of thought.
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Alright let's begin. This photo is amazing. The pose- striking, unusual, beautiful. The hair- OMFG I LOVE IT, (the hair swish reminds me of the album artwork for Marry The Night by Lady Gaga. She's sitting on an exploding car, and she swishes her bob to the side. You have definitely captured that essence of not to pose-y, but pose-y enough. To be honest with you, I don't think that this photo would have the same allure and mystery if you had just taken a regular portrait. But you got that... je ne sais quoi, surrounding the concept and execution.

The clothes. NIIIIIIIIICE. I like the clothes a lot, because it adds another layer of personality; it's quite striking.

Over all, I love this shot. Keep up he GREAT work!
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shadowgrafix [2012-02-27 17:30:02 +0000 UTC]

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I really like this, it's really inspirational to photographers everywhere I Think.

Honestly, it's really good. Just the way that you captured it and the pose that she's in, the hair color, the mood of the place. It's all coming together in one big chunk of awesomeness!

I love where she's positioned as well, just the way she looks you know? And the place you took it in was a really good choice to take the photo! Also the outfit is amazing. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Love it lol. I think there are some things you could change, but I can't think of any off the top of my head. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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double-DJ [2012-02-27 16:05:38 +0000 UTC]

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the best thing I like about this? the way the hair stands out from the rest of the picture it's soo... cool. and very original. I don't know anyone who has hair like that. (in fact, I'm quite jealous of her hair, I want hair like that.)

I also like how you can't see her face, it gives the picture a sense of illusion, or maybe, mystery.

I don't think i can find anything bad about the picture, but maybe doing the same thing but in a wooded area? with trees around her? that would be quite cool ^_^

i also LOVE her boots. they are AWESOME! i would love a pair like those xD

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curlandgrazes [2012-02-27 11:39:36 +0000 UTC]

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I like the idea and I like the subject. Her clothes (or costume if this was hand picked by you) is great with the title (fan of the chilis too by the way e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>) - the monochrome tones do make it look like the uniform, and the pattern on her tights too and the lace- up shoes. However it's not so obvious - just an implication of a uniform, which I think is great.

The fact that her face is covered by her hair and is turned away from the camera immediately brings my focus to the rest of her body; despite her hair colour, just the positition of her head immediately makes me look somewhere else. I don't know if this is your intention, but it makes the subject look... aloof and uninterested which is quite unpleasant for me to look at.

Despite the previous crtiques I do like her awkward positioning. To me, this is a redeeming factor - even though she seems uninterested and thus a bit annoying, I am interested in HER because of her awkwardness. At least I am interested momentarily, which is enough.

I liked the depth of field. The background on the top part of the image being really distant is in consistency with her aloofness - it is effective in that sense. Oddly enough, the sharper focus on the foreground (grass) coupled with the focus on the subject's body really does make me hone in on her body language and things it might symbolise. I don't quite know what those things are, but it makes me interested to find out.

The exposure is... "perfect" technically. But again, this adds to her air of coldness and distance which, I've mentioned, is not pleasing to me. If the lighting was a little darker and if there were more shadow (even though this might blow up parts of the picture) I think she will appear more... with depth... you know? Like she has something to say. Like already mentioned, if it weren't for wonderfully awkward body I might not even look at this twice.

The photograph is taken with skill and creativity, however there's something in it that I just don't LIKE.

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Antitotu [2012-02-27 10:39:07 +0000 UTC]

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I like it even though the position of the model seems a bit forced to me (like not that natural e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> and the contrast between the character and the background is fading somehow, I mean that the character should be a bit more important (in this case, it could be fixed by adding some more color on the clothing, not just on the hair, it just feels like ...not enough)...
Besides that this photo impressed me, but then again this is a rule applied all over "sex sells" e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>... the model looks awesome, certainly you know what you're doing, the image is giving me the big picture about what's meant to happen there (like "getting back from school" kind of thing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> ...
keep it up ...cheers'

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K-i-d-a [2012-02-27 05:39:30 +0000 UTC]

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I absolutely love this picture !

I love the difference between how the background is really drab and different and makes the girl completely stand out.
I love how she is dressed and the pose she is making. It's not a natural walking pose or anything.
I absolutely love the color of her hair and how it is covering her face.
I love how she is holding the rosary, like she is saying "I still have my faith, but I'm not going to conform to the idealistic way people see Catholics. I'm going to be me, doesn't matter if you like it or not."

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RS-Kyra [2012-02-27 05:36:48 +0000 UTC]

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I have to say, I give you an excellent rating on this piece. The contrast from what she's wearing to the background is really striking; she's dressed as if she belongs on a city avenue somewhere, shopping at some hipster, non-chain stores and maybe meeting friends for coffee. She looks very unnatural in a natural environment; her clothes are all likely synthetic and her hair is clearly dyed bright orange.

I also like how she isn't in the very center of the frame; being off to the side really accents the rule of thirds.

Normally, I don't like blurred backgrounds or extra brightness coming from the sky, but as it isn't screwing with her hair and it actually helps bring attention to her pose, I like it here.

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Puccoon [2012-02-27 04:18:08 +0000 UTC]

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This, in my opinion, is simply a lame photo taken with an overpriced camera. There is no special part of this picture, it isn't natural enough to be artistic and too posed to be professional. It's very boring, no real meaning behind it, no effort made on the photographer's part. Yes, she is a slightly attractive female, but she isn't doing anything spectacular, and her hair stands out way too much for it to be anything original. Just some chick walking through a marsh in a slutty outfit with cheap bright orange hair. I personally don't see why this is a good picture, again, with it being a rather cliche picture of an unnaturally posed fruitcake girl trying to get popular on the internet with a really expensive camera. I don't know, maybe that's just my thought.

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Afrocan [2012-02-27 03:43:59 +0000 UTC]

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I think that the background clashes a bit with the girl, but somehow, it makes it look better. The pose and appearance of the girl makes the photo very unique. The fact that she doesn't show her face gives the photo more impact, giving the viewer a desire to know what she looks like, enjoying it even more. Perhaps leaving out some of the accessories from the picture would've been better.. The title kind of baffled me, although I liked it.
You did a great job on this photograph. I think that you are very talented in this area. Kudos.

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wowhow [2012-02-27 01:25:24 +0000 UTC]

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like the critique by lolikai ithink she is in an awkward position. you might not have done this on purpose but i think it looks cool, like a teen that wants to hold on to her child past, the way that she seems to be following the tire track. here dark outfit clashes witht the background though. her clothes are just the right color in contrast with her hair but the background is just.... i don't know... like, to BRIGHT. try doing the same picture at night or in a dark room. i think that if her leg was more at an 102 degree angle and the background was on the night of the full moon this would be wonderful. good job!!

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Angelic-Necro77 [2012-02-27 01:22:25 +0000 UTC]

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The leg position is awkward and would be more effective if she were fixing her shoe, giving her more of a normal sense. Remermber that in photography you need to exphasise a level of normalness. That your not even taking the picture. The head position is marvelous but unreasonable with what her arm and leg are doing. Her hair and the background could be more well placed.

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The hair and lipstick is absoulutly beautiful but the shirt doesnt work. It could with a sweater but it just looks weird.

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Keep doing what you do and youll-get there!

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the-little-skylark [2012-02-27 00:38:42 +0000 UTC]

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Having just reviewed your portfolio I think this is actually one of your best pieces of work. What other critics here fail to realise it seems is that you are doing everything yourself, from being the model to taking the picture to styling to picking a location! So hats off to you for that! I think the location was perfect, I have NO issue with fact that you are walking in the mud, it adds some realism to the vision for me of a rebellious slightly punk school girl who does not give a sh*t. Perhaps she is walking home from school and this is the offbeat path she chooses? I don't think the image needs to be darker, to me it perfectly translates to me the title of the piece. The Oscar Wilde jumper is wonderful edition too. The hair color really is what makes this piece stand out though, especially with that sharp cut. I love the pose, I don't think it looks remotely awkward, I think it looks playful and childlike in the way that you'd expect from a "school girl" image. Overall I think the popularity of this image speaks for itself. I clicked it because it caught my eye, and I'm certain others will do the same. In short you did good, keep doing what you do! And whatever you do don't give up the interesting poses, I'm so bored of girls standing naturally over and over, e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz"/> Keep being unique.

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Truthless00 [2012-02-27 00:08:12 +0000 UTC]

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I agree with lolikai. Her leg position is really awkward and she looks as though she is about to fall over. Actually to tell you the truth she appears as though she is trying to do yoga which is not quite appropriate for this picture. I like how the background is all bleak because it makes the girl stand out even more. If she was in another setting it wouldn't quite carry the same message.

The clothes are good and plain but next time I suggest a button down shirt in exchange for the stylized one. Also if she had on an equally bright necktie that would help some. Or a bright bracelet of some kind would work too. I like the vivid hair color but it draws too much attention from her clothing, which holds as much importance. Over all though good job!

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Naki-dono [2012-02-26 23:43:57 +0000 UTC]

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I'm loving the bright hair that the girl has! Rebellious look. I do have to agree with a previous critique about the legs. It's just a little too twisted, and I think if it was a bit more angled it wouldn't be as awkward looking.
I kind of like the foreground with her being out in the wilderness by herself to be in her own thoughts kind of deal, but the background isn't as great as the foreground. Maybe choose a different location with a church or a school in the distance. You can even possibly photoshop that in the background perhaps.
I like most of her outfit, the blue skirt and the tights with her boots kind of goes with the schoolgirl look. Her shirt is just a little too casual though. Maybe if you had some kind of dress shirt and add a loose skinny tie, then that would really make it look more like a schoolgirl. Also, if you use a dress shirt don't tuck it in, make it more rebellious. Rolling up the sleeves a bit to make them 3/4 length would help in the rebellious look as well.

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ironspriter [2012-02-26 21:00:07 +0000 UTC]

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a average photo in my opinion. the pose of the girl is quite good, but the contrast with the background and the environment just ruins the whole picture to me. such a beautiful young lady walking on the dirt? it just doesn't feel right. and if you chose this environment on purpose, you didn't emphasize the darkness of this area enough. her clothing is good though! and a major plus of this image is the hair colour, simply beautiful! My advise; choose a different environment, or make the environment darker. in other words, more photoshop! on a scale from 1 to 10 i'd give this image a 6.75 (6.5 was too low, and 7 too high). I hope i could help you (and don't get you mad at me)

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lolikai [2012-02-26 20:42:36 +0000 UTC]

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You used the rule of thirds in a very effective way in this piece. Congrats! I do, however, think that her leg position is somewhat aakward. Maybe if it was slanted a bit more naturally it wouldn't look quite so uncomfortable.

The bleakness of the background causes her to stand out more visually, so i like that you made that choice. Keeping her in nutral colors, too, was very effective when paired with her vibrant hair color.

Back to her body position. The way she holds the rosery translates a sort of guilt in thiss piece, like she's repenting for something. Similarily, putting her on a path leading towards an unknown destination adds to the bleakness of her choices or opportunities at that moment in her life. She struggles to break out of the lifeless world that she travels through, searching for answers in what she has learned to believe in.

Overall, I think you did a beautiful job with this piece. Remember to keep the body natural, don't try to push it into different positions that appear uncomfortable.

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