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Published: 2013-02-17 08:48:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3686; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 0
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Comission by"Character card created for a card game coming in March 2013!
(Do i get this card if i join?
)Characters belongs to Zun/Team Shanghai Alice"
Fixed Bugs: (haha)
- Metallic looking scarf piece
- Oversaturated colors
- Reduced Boobshadow
- Recolored Hair with third shade
- Removed Frog
- Redid the Eyes
- Redid face shading
- Added sharper Hat shadow
+Changing mouth
Will add more fixes as requested
Third fix, I think It's looking ok now, still awaiting orders on the BG
Is this ok as a "Simple Background"?
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Comments: 20
I can't really put my finger on it, but I think the eyes ain't properly leveled to the head's tilt. Consider moving that left eye down slightly. The shadow inside the hat isn't strong enough also, feels like whole area should be at least two shades darker. The hat's right eye seems to be floating quite a bit, a bit more closer to the hat would be great. The fabrics still feel a bit too metallic, and those folds on the sleeves really feel out of place. How come this drawing feels so low quality compare to your previous ones?
Something simple like a tiny frog or fish flat shape or even just circles would really make the background pop out more.
I love Suwako.
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Yeah, I was thinking the fabrics looked sorta metallic.. I must've been drawing too many cars lately... How do i fix that?
I could tint the hat shadows back down but i just wanted some reddish in the pic, Just so it looks more colorful
I've flipped the image a few times and suwako's eyes look ok to me. Do you mean the hat eyes?
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See if this helps. I don't have my tablet right now, this is the best I can do with mouse.
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It's hard to make the changes later, i should add you on skype so i can have you look at stuff since the draft
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Right side of the face still need to fixed imo (just a bit fatter to add more "width" to her face so it doesn't look like a piece of cardboard). The open mouth smile is better also, should stick with it.
Now that I looked at your original sketch, your current nose feels a bit off. I can't really put my finger on it, but I think it's probably slightly too high up. Your original sketch's shade/fold for the breast area makes more sense... the current one feels too skintight and lewd. You got the left upper sleeve in the right feel, the right upper sleeve and left lower sleeve are still a bit awkward.
Maybe add few more braid of hair on the back of the head (slightly right of the right side bang) that are going leftward, so her back hair won't look like a V spread anymore.
I have skype, but I almost never gets on. Besides, I like to have my music on full blast.
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Thanks for Helping me check the picture out. I liked the open mouth better too, and felt the hair was too triangle-ish, but This is a commission, So i have to do what they ask of me. And Hair is based on the references I received.
The picture is completed, this isn't the stage for changes in proportion and line-art. (I did make the changes just for you anyway).
But Hence why I suggested a messenger, so I can show you the sketch for next time. Because these suggestions would be more useful at that stage.
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No problem. I know how hard it is to draw alone, I get skewed perspectives whenever I work on a piece for too long and things simply stop making sense.
A picture is never finish until you "decide" it is! Never stop achieving for perfection!
On side note, can I get you to draw/redesign some OC for me? I'm not very creative when it comes to outfits.
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I actually tried perfection, spent 6 months on a single pic, hours everyday, still not perfect
It's past the stage of "fixing" It takes too long to correct anything right now so I really don't want to touch it. since I think it looks correct as it is.
And sure, add me on some messenger.
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Skype name? Mine is metal.karma
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Tried making the changes, what do you think?
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Looks really nice. Like the colors and overall dynamic.
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...Disregard that too, I've just been told to keep it on.
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This has developed really well: I really love the shading on Pyonta and Suwako looks like she's full of energy! ^^
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The background goes with the whole piece well so no worries at all and hope your friend will like it especially after you fixed up this already amazing yet cute piece.
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No worries at all and always a pleasure.
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