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furvert101 In reply to ??? [2010-03-09 19:09:11 +0000 UTC]
hmmmm you should ask someone to ask justin maller to feature it as a DD...
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Zerj19 In reply to ??? [2010-03-09 03:43:46 +0000 UTC]
the best part is tha ALL my watchers are gonna read this! lol
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 08:42:40 +0000 UTC]
lol i know... your little mafia is gonna beat me down for this. lol
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-09 08:56:35 +0000 UTC]
you should submit this as a DD....I'll get it for sure...
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Zerj19 In reply to ??? [2010-03-09 03:43:15 +0000 UTC]
The part where Heidi Montag is being compared to my artwork made that whole new asshole ripping worth the pain...thanx for the critique...you really give an honest (again painful) looks at things...that wall thing def made me rethink the way I do this..
I will cry myself to sleep tonight but tomorrow I'll make something new ^^
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 05:42:27 +0000 UTC]
haha... i know i was a little harsh but heh... if i didnt like you or your work i wouldnt give you the time of day. also, this is a critique on your work period... not on your overall progress... this is what i would say if i had no clue who created it.
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-09 12:39:06 +0000 UTC]
BTW I do need to remind you that although it wasn't supposed to look fake , it also wasnt supposed to look real....I wanted it to look like plastic...maybe not as flat ,my original idea was way different,but something ethereal and not very far away from my style with high contrast and saturated colors with not a lot of hues but instead playing with different shades of the same...
also as for the splatter , I coulve well used some stock that looked more real or whatever but I wanted it to be like paint or melted platic which often dont show that much texture....
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 17:20:47 +0000 UTC]
i get that but the overall execution could have been alot better. and it doesnt look plastic. it looks bad. im sure your next project will wow me, or come close, like alot of your newer stuff.
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 19:07:53 +0000 UTC]
its all good.... if anything its a compliment to your other work. as a piece in general, its not HORRIBLE but others think it looks great. so in contrast, you make alot of great artwork compared to this, so your other work is actually really good. everyone makes a crappy piece every now and then... kinda like my "what else is there" project. lol it sucks.
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 19:17:25 +0000 UTC]
lol... thats what maller said... he was like... "typography is horrible, the project is unoriginal, and has no substance..." ive taken beatings too... but i like isolation, so what ever... i take the advice and apply it to other projects.
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-09 20:11:16 +0000 UTC]
I like my dieoxis too! thats why I was so D: with the critique..
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-10 03:28:18 +0000 UTC]
haha!!! sorry... its your critique, you can remove it any time.
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-10 03:36:20 +0000 UTC]
lol no I can't!
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-09 10:33:43 +0000 UTC]
a little? I'll be having sex on my brand new asshole now...
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 19:08:07 +0000 UTC]
lol. chillllll out
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madmadman01 [2013-10-01 05:51:12 +0000 UTC]
hehe. dropping acid in prison. prison of your mind.
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Nils-Iver [2010-12-16 00:18:07 +0000 UTC]
i like your kind of art. very..simple in it's presentation but still so..something cool
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ElSohnSchon [2010-06-01 21:06:58 +0000 UTC]
O_O
i never look this shit!
+fav fo sho
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Slifer-ArT [2010-04-03 03:25:07 +0000 UTC]
wow amazing work
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FreezerSting [2010-03-10 13:18:27 +0000 UTC]
Anyways what this furvert guy is saying is a load of bullshit.
hes telling you to go for a more realistic style while it is clear that you were not even going for that in the first place.
For christ sakes the guy has been using photoshop for two years and hes trash for a 2 year long user, wow and he is even studying design in college?
Zerj you're one of the artists i have had mad respect for, i'm not his little fanboy furvert, more like an acquantaince in an artpack, I just saw this critique and thought it was Grossly unfair. I don't usually rage or shit on people who give good, critique, but honestly, half of the critique he just gave isn't even valid.
I had a look at the guys portfolio, its boring as hell, everything is LQ, and most of the FX methods used are so raw even a layman to graphic design will be able to see what he did there.
"realistic element is non existent. " rofl, talks like he fucking sets the rules of art, took a look at his da, porfolio, behance, whatever, and his art is so boring lol.
is this what they teach in design school? to hone the finer points like colors (bland and boring), repeat the exact same techniques in 3 pieces(wow i cut up stocks of people) and then make the quality nice (oh wow i used HQ stocks)?
atm wondering how you dared to say his color choice was weak, and the project had no substance, when you're pretencious sense of "fine art" leads yourself to think you the right to shit on people's work who is better than yours.
lol, my 2 cents, i feel that that critique was taking a seriously wrong point of view at the piece. Imo the artist should have been applauded for the fresh choice of colors, (fresher than yours furvert lol, you use black and white and mix in little bits of color), and hes actually challenging himself with this piece, the depth isnt perfect, and places need work, but the concept is strong, the composition is solid. if nothing less, the artist tries to be fresh, he tries to use an interesting perspective, and actually brings something new to the art scene (to be frank, this is an awesome attempt at using vectors in manipulation to attain a unique quality to the piece)
The piece isnt "his worse", not by far, i posted before reading your load of shit, that this was one of his best pieces. Maybe it doesnt follow your artschool standards or whatever, but imo you overlook the less technical aspects of the piece, like the freshness, perspective, and overall creative combination of mix media, honing in on the flaws like the white glow in the edges (i don't like that too, but to be perfect, is to be boring).
lol sorry for the rage, but i think that what fulvert posted was ridiculously unfair to this piece.
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Zerj19 In reply to FreezerSting [2010-03-12 06:59:27 +0000 UTC]
I knew his critique would bring out some kind of heat....very mixed opinios..its weird...everytime I think I out did myself ,I get the most harsh critiques!lol
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FreezerSting In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-12 09:13:25 +0000 UTC]
critique? more like steaming load of bullshit.hes some jealous hater imo lol, unless you guys are extremely close friends or something, which i dont understand why he would point out everything bad in your piece and miss all the good things on it..
anyways, dont worry zerj, in my honest opinion you have outdone yourself quite nicely lol. Keep at it mate
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FreezerSting [2010-03-10 13:04:07 +0000 UTC]
apparently, i need a premium membership to post in the advanced critique thread
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EnumaElishDesigns [2010-03-08 16:46:57 +0000 UTC]
bastante interesante compa
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-08 16:24:35 +0000 UTC]
meh what bitch?
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-08 21:33:36 +0000 UTC]
its ok... i think you could do alot better.
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-08 21:48:18 +0000 UTC]
lol I mean I DONT like hearing that kinda stuff...I re-read my comment and it sounded a little weird..lol
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-08 21:46:46 +0000 UTC]
well.. I guess I could...but it started getting annoying towards the end...I didn't know what to add and photoshop crashed evry 10 minutes...if you got time to give further criqitue ,please do I'd like to hear something else like..you should do this and that..or you should add/remove whatever..At this point I need some real useful critique...
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 03:34:20 +0000 UTC]
left a critique that will most likely get me hate mail, but whatever. i dont care, we homies! hahaha...
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Zerj19 In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-09 03:45:09 +0000 UTC]
the only thing that bothers m is that all my watchers are gonna read it lol!..If you were anyone else I would tell you to fuck the fuck fucking off....but I enjoy your critiques lmao..
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furvert101 In reply to Zerj19 [2010-03-09 03:15:22 +0000 UTC]
will do...
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Bolv3rk [2010-03-08 01:26:34 +0000 UTC]
ยกMuy buen trabajo zerj!
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furvert101 In reply to Joetjuhh [2010-03-08 06:52:15 +0000 UTC]
i disagree... i think he can do much better... but then im the guy that doesnt tell him his stuff looks fabulous if i dont think it does. haha!!! he knows that though.
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Joetjuhh In reply to furvert101 [2010-03-08 15:50:20 +0000 UTC]
Look at it this way:
I'm just saying his work is nice ( and be honoust, its nice ) though there are some flaws ( which indicates that I don't think it's fabulous, though I have the feeling you kinda got that interpretation wrong ).
I know Zerj for a little while now, and he's in my group (revuh), and I know how to support him or give him comments ( wrote some honoust Critiques for him on a few pieces of him ).
I know how to give CnC. Though I know he also knows this is piece is not one of his greatest. On the other hand, practise makes perfect.
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