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Published: 2009-02-22 23:34:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2072; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 21
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Something I saw on page which looked pretty damn interesting so I made my own one
If this turns into an OCT I'll definately be handing in an audition for this
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OC's from Top to left
Linken: We all know him from Corrupted-Core which he's fighting in at the moment 
Jed Tracer: Protagonist in my webcomic "Legend of the Omega Rider" 
Razee: From SDL in her original modern day design with a tweak to her hairstyle 
Arke: An OC I made for EnterVOID which failed horribly and has now been redone, details later 
EDIT: Added Blacks and fixed Razee's left breast
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It looks awesome, man!
My crits: I love the large area of black in the characters hair at the top, but then the black areas diminish near the bottom of the picture which makes the composition look a little top heavy. I think more black ares could really make it punchy!
Also, the character on the right with the dark hair, his eye could be spaced further to the left methinks, looks a tad too close to the nose for me.
Otherwise it looks really cool! Love the poses!
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Nice job! The guy on the left looks like Yugi (from Yu-Gi-Oh, IMO 
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Thanks! Why not make your own then we can see your manga self too
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I will! X) wait for it ~
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Wow! Looks really good, Zero! I loved the composition and expressions.
And the outlines are better than ever!
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Thanks Ren
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Looks interesting will go have a look and see what itβs about.
Nice composition, they are always such a performance to make. (Well I think so anyway
My only crit is this. Razee's (Char in the bottom left right?) right (our left) breast is noticeably larger than her left one.
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Yeah thanks man
Do you perhaps buy ImagineFX magazine? They has a great article on Composition in one issue (haven't got the magazine on hand, when I do I can let you know)
Heh heh yeah that left breast bothered me as well so I fixed it, I hope
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