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Zia-AAR — Match Made In Tuition

Published: 2008-07-06 10:37:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 289; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Heads down,pens running
But he thinks that she is stunning

The brevity in witnessing her beauty
The augury of catching her attention-he is greedy!!

A slugish flow of emotions,ooze out ever again...
Those dark eyelined eyes
Which have the dexterity to cause obfuscation again...

Thoughts are hindered when reality striked his head
A few giggles are passed instead!

A triumphant movement runs down
If she ever looks at him for a while

Its a charitable charm,cheap and chaste
A celestial feeling,kept in his heart.

Will they ever cojecture a connection between themselves?
Will she be conscious of his feelings ever again?

A coy boy is sitting looking at her
Crafted with the cream of hers
I am struggling to understand a trigonometric expression
But he single mindedly looks at her...
As he saw an incarnation in the tuition!!
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Comments: 12

Enskie [2008-07-23 11:56:32 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could write that well, I really do, it's beautiful. Your English is very good for an Indian, since I'm assuming that it's your second language.

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Zia-AAR In reply to Enskie [2008-07-23 15:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks for the comments
But here in India English is not the second language;it is the First language,in every schools we have.Anyways Hindi [link]
( which is our regional language) is the Second language here. But I do agree that the English terms used in this poem is a level higher so that just makes it complete
PS: Do not underestimate Indian English.


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Life Is A Test.I Was Not Able To Make Good Notes.

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Enskie In reply to Zia-AAR [2008-07-23 21:14:57 +0000 UTC]

I don't underestimate Indian English, it's jut that I assumed it as a second language, so I reasoned that it would not be as literary and well educated as yours.

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Zia-AAR In reply to Enskie [2008-07-24 10:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Hey I just told to update you
After all its my pleasure to tell you more about my country.Hope you understand that.
Anyways I SINCERELY HOPE that you LIKED the POEM
Its an inspiration for me



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Enskie In reply to Zia-AAR [2008-07-24 10:32:01 +0000 UTC]

I honestly enjoyed reading your works, and I will continue to read them until none are left to read, then I will wait for you to write more.

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Zia-AAR In reply to Enskie [2008-07-24 10:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh Thank you
You Made my day



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Life Is A Test.I Was Not Able Good Notes.

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meathear8 [2008-07-08 11:18:15 +0000 UTC]

love this!

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Zia-AAR In reply to meathear8 [2008-07-11 10:27:07 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks



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Aavis [2008-07-06 15:37:12 +0000 UTC]

It's got the "DARD"..!! Gr8 work!!

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Zia-AAR In reply to Aavis [2008-07-07 17:38:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks cockroach




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Cinnabar-Red [2008-07-06 10:47:31 +0000 UTC]

LORD. Love This One! Awesome Work!

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Zia-AAR In reply to Cinnabar-Red [2008-07-06 12:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you



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