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////////////--ESPAÑOL-///////////////////Anterior Primera Siguiente
Capitulo 1
Capitulo 2
Capitulo 3
Capitulo 4
Capitulo 5
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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
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Comments: 14
This looks awesome! I'm going to start reading it as soon as possible!
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Nice!, thanks for reading i hope You like it
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I like your drawing style and comic so far, but I first came up on the Spanish version and I was like "darn, wish they had...oh, there's English!"
Yeah, anyways, I'm just randomly jumping from deviation to deviation so figured might as well ask
for a little critique if you or anyone else would be willing to. I'll tell you what I think about your work (honestly
and nicely), and you tell me what I can improve on. Sound fair? Just write back if you're interested, if not, no need!
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yeah im on it for the critique exchange XD
thanks for reading by the way
what do you want me to criticize? any piece in particular?
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No problemo, you can look at whichever you want. Is there specifically one you want me to do?
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well the comic in general, is the story interesting?, are the characters easy to like, things like that would be great to know XD
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I like the fact the female isn't one of those typical-weak-female character types to begin with.
She's brash and strong mentally, but also won't be afraid to ask for help when needed.
I also like the shmexy hunter...
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thanks, well XD I, mostly, hate when in a story the female keeps getting in the way cause is the typical weak but wanna be strong, like when the character says: stay in the car, and there she goes and get caught and all that stuff, I think nobody would act like that, so she is more like a common girl (in real life XD), she has her ego and mental resolution but, I mean, if you se that two guys are fighting to death with knives and stuff and you barely know the two of them, you are going to check things out before act, specially if one of them came from nowhere and threw sharp objects in your direction XD.
so I try to make her as complete, mentally, as possible, of course, since its a comic I have to exaggerate some things some times XD to define her but thats another story.
hehehe, thanks, I'm dying to tell his story but... I've been really busy, with some work projects and there will be no more pages for a while (like a month or something like that)
thanks for your comment =3
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Browsing around and spotted this. I'm going to guess that its going to be a kind of werewolf comic?
Anyway your arts pretty good. I'm not one of talent but I get better each day.
Can't wait to see where this goes
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If life gives you lemons...
Make lemonade and watch as everyone around you trys to figure out how you did it :'
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Ok I feel stupid. please replace the lemonade in my statement with orangejuice. not much of a joke now huh?
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XD LOL
no prob
by the way, the rest of the comic (its unfinished yet but it have another 7 pages)
the rest of it is here --> [link] and here (the 8th page ) [link]
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Alright. I read them and the comic is coming along well. If you ever need help with the english dialouge I wouldn't mind helping. you could show the page how you want it and I could give you the corrections? If you want. But anyway, your doing a great job. Can't wait for the next page!
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the next page is coming soon in this week or the next XD
iv taken a vacations so im restarting the uploads soon XD
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