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Zire9 β Stretching out - Wip 1-3
Published: 2012-07-29 04:28:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 895; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 11
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-----EspaΓ±ol-----un adelanto de lo que estoy haciendo en estos momentos (el pelo esta siendo un dolor de cabeza XD pero estoy decidido a terminarlo, aunque no se si sera este fin de semana o el que sigue)
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a preview of what im doing (the fur is being a headache but im resolved to finish it, this weekend or the next one XD)
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se ve bien, ya habrΓ‘ que verla terminada (espero que no pase del otro aΓ±o hahaha) me gusta la pose
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Bueno, no va mal, quizΓ‘s lo veo por igual en muchas zonas donde deberΓa tener diferentes longitudes y aspecto pero hacer pelo es un dolor en el culo, paciencia y gusto por el detalle, es lo que te recomiendo.
PD. Linda loba
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lo bueno es que esta vez no es pelo por pelo XD, asi que voy como 5 veces mas rapido de lo que normalmente iria jaja
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que linda pose, jeje y ademas que simpatico personaje ^w^
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gracias =3 a mi tambien me agrada
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Critique?
While I am not sure if there is a 'style' you are going for...
I have to say you are getting well onto the path of more realism with your fur. It is difficult for me to design in the digital of media, yet you seem to be grasping it better then me thus far...
The "Next Step"... All the hairs are -short- on her. Little etched lines, while doing quite well in going the direction which fur grows... they don't give the depth or feeling that extended hairs go~
I like looking at Maned Wolves as study to this, they have nice variant and 'texture'[?] in their growing fluffums <3 [link] + [link] + [link]
I like the long hair that is hinted to be going on here. You progress well, it's cool to see the bits of changes.
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While I'm not saying the 'short fur' look is bad, it does exist... sorta like on african canines [link] like jackals, but also varieties of domestic dogs too one could argue.
Loving this so far and, as always, excited to see your outcome <3
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hehe thanks for the critique =3, well the fur is not that hard (with this technique that came to me in this one XD, it takes a lot of time but its faster than the "hair by hair" tech that everyone likes, im just scribbling it in random ways, but following the right direction)
at the time i havent done the long fur yet (but now that you mention it i think i should correct the patches that come out from her cheeks, it looks super short and should be longer 
im planing to do the long stuff and details with the highlights of her fur (like the border of her ears and lights of her face)
and finally im going to delete the lineart (that will be hard XD but i think i can manage it, lets see if im right lol)
thanks for the critique much appreciated *.*,
oh and dont be afraid to tell me harsh things like: the hands are all wrong, the pose looks weird XD. Maybe i wont correct it on the actual drawing (cause if i do that ill be stuck with the same one for life XD) but ill use the critiques for the next one =3.
woah super long post, thanks for reading too XD
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I have a little more input into this as well! (if you don't mind 
I think you mentioned that you might be doing something similar to this anyway but after you're done with all of the dark fur lines it would be best to go back and ALSO follow up with lighter fur lines. The trick being that usually they lay right next too and along the darker fur lines. It does take allot of additional time but the effect double's the "realism" of the piece.
After that is done THEN you can go in and add a few white lines of fur and so forth for highlights and such. I like to add highlight lines of particular ambient colors myself for some reason 
I don't think these will compare to what you'll get (if you keep putting the time and effort into this!) but here are some examples of the effects I'm talking about [link] , [link] .
Anyway, it is allot of time and effort but I think you'll enjoy the fruits of your labor with this picture 
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WOW!!! she looks just fantastic!!! es un buen trabajo por todo el esfuerzo
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For all the trouble, it looks really good.
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hehe thanks its good to hear (read) that its coming out good =3
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Your welcome. I know how you feel.
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