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Ok, here we have the companion picture to my 'Claygirl Gamble' story, set in the world of Malaterra; the setting for 's game Helpless Heroine.
Claygirl GambleDeep inside the volcano near Hot Peak Tower
“What are we supposed to do now?” Bartette groaned.
“I told you this was a stupid idea” Jarvess added, “We should get out of here now before something else attacks us”
“We can't just give up!” Bartette retorted, “Onyx will think of something”
“You're crazy” Jarvess insisted, “She may have beaten the Spirit of Ice, but she can't swim a river of lava!”
Jarvess, formerly Jarvis, was a little taller than other Malaterran women, with dark skin, and thick curly brown hair. When the Slaver's Guild had first cursed Jarvis into a woman, they had enchanted his golden loop earring to force him to keep his male mind to increase his punishment.
Bartette, formerly Bart, was shorter than Jarvess and had pale skin and long ginger hair. Like Jarvis, Bart had been a rebel sympathiser, though unlike Jarvis, Bart had been turned female repeatedly due to magical misfortune,

Onyx is invoking her hidden powers to throw off the influence of the Spirit of Fire so she can reverse her Claygirl transformation and save the rest of the Spirit's victims.
Behind her are Bridget, Hannah, Jarvess, Beryl, Zeena, and Bartette.

A couple of things that I'm really not happy about with this one, but I can pretty much sum it up as "the right side of the page"
When I was colouring everyone, I was working with the assumption that they would be most lit from the lava on their side of the page, and I'd pretty much done it all before I remembered that as well as her eyes and mouth glowing, Onyx would be emitting light from the hole in the side of her head, and thus providing another light source to work on everyone on that side. I tried fixing it in post production, but it honestly just made it worse, so I had to leave it like this.

So, yeah
Apologies for the obvious foul up
Enjoy, please comment, and enjoy

Characters belong to
This pic belongs to me

Description
Ok, here we have the companion picture to my 'Claygirl Gamble' story, set in the world of Malaterra; the setting for 's game Helpless Heroine.
Claygirl GambleDeep inside the volcano near Hot Peak Tower
“What are we supposed to do now?” Bartette groaned.
“I told you this was a stupid idea” Jarvess added, “We should get out of here now before something else attacks us”
“We can't just give up!” Bartette retorted, “Onyx will think of something”
“You're crazy” Jarvess insisted, “She may have beaten the Spirit of Ice, but she can't swim a river of lava!”
Jarvess, formerly Jarvis, was a little taller than other Malaterran women, with dark skin, and thick curly brown hair. When the Slaver's Guild had first cursed Jarvis into a woman, they had enchanted his golden loop earring to force him to keep his male mind to increase his punishment.
Bartette, formerly Bart, was shorter than Jarvess and had pale skin and long ginger hair. Like Jarvis, Bart had been a rebel sympathiser, though unlike Jarvis, Bart had been turned female repeatedly due to magical misfortune,

Onyx is invoking her hidden powers to throw off the influence of the Spirit of Fire so she can reverse her Claygirl transformation and save the rest of the Spirit's victims.
Behind her are Bridget, Hannah, Jarvess, Beryl, Zeena, and Bartette.

A couple of things that I'm really not happy about with this one, but I can pretty much sum it up as "the right side of the page"
When I was colouring everyone, I was working with the assumption that they would be most lit from the lava on their side of the page, and I'd pretty much done it all before I remembered that as well as her eyes and mouth glowing, Onyx would be emitting light from the hole in the side of her head, and thus providing another light source to work on everyone on that side. I tried fixing it in post production, but it honestly just made it worse, so I had to leave it like this.

So, yeah
Apologies for the obvious foul up
Enjoy, please comment, and enjoy

Characters belong to
This pic belongs to me