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Published: 2014-02-07 02:46:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 3364; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 12
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Tsk tsk, bit stumbly Bats? XD
I SAID I'D DO IT. I DID IT. I'm planning on this to be four pages long, but I might end up doing more.
Next page soon.
First page: (you're here)
Second page:
(forgot the copyright stuff -3-)
Batman and Wonder Woman (c) DC comicsΒ
Funnily enough, DC Comics actually is 'Detective Comics Comics' ...
And you can think you can out-nerd me, watchers .
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Like the colors. And the time with Diana when she breaths
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I really like it! Very good for your first try and I can't wait for the next couple of pages.Β
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It's... beautiful!
Okay, the art could use a little more work, but the sript/dialog/narration is exceptionally good. Kudos to you!
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I know, it needs a LOT more work. It's just I've never done comics before, and lemme tell ya. They're harder to do than you think. XD The Batman silhouette is a bit derpy and I messed up on Diana's hair, I noticed it was wrong when I was half-way through coloring it and I was like 'NUUUUUUUUUUU.' I also had a ton of homework to do. X3
Any idea on what to do next time would be great! I'm working on the next one now //determined to get Wonder Woman's hair right//. Also, thank you for the critique!
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Well, for a first try it's pretty darn excellent. And I know how hard it is. I couldn't draw anything decent even if my life depended on it.
Diana's hair is actually quite good, even if it could have been longer.
As for an idea for a sequel... How about having them have breakfast at her apartment? Then, when they're about to kiss, they get interrupted by an JL emergency call. XD
I know it sounds cheesy, but it won't be a problem if they are both written in-character.
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That's actually a good Idea, once I finish up these scene in Paris I'll do that. Thanks!
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excellent!!! i can't wait for the next chapter
BMWW is the greatest couple ever!
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OMG this is so cool and cute at the same time, keep up the fine work.
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Thank you! I'm gonna work hard this weekend to get the next one out, thanks for the support!
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Pffft, I cant out nerd anyone.
Anyway this looks great! :3
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Sunsets...
Sunsets are hard -3-''
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