RussianTim [2011-05-25 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]
This is really good. Especially the first two stanzas. You can really see a parallel between romance in music throughout the poem. You also do great at keeping it sultry and sexy without it being too over the top. Great job!
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ZombiixBabii In reply to RussianTim [2011-05-25 03:50:13 +0000 UTC]
Thankies! ^_^ I'm glad you caught on and appreciated it; that's pretty much exactly what I was going for. So once again, thank you very much, dear. :3
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