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ZOOBR — A Girl Named Violet by-nd
Published: 2011-02-06 03:21:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description We danced once, a long time ago, when we both still had our innocents, I still remember that rainy afternoon, happier times back then, but now look at where we are, you fell to drugs when you felt alone and I became a killer, stealing life to try and save what was left of my own, I sometimes wish things were different, if only we could share one more dance in the rain, perhaps we could change what we are, but I don't think so.
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Comments: 20

violetennis1 [2011-05-08 17:53:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG There's a poem named after me!!! Aww...thank you so much!!! <3 <3 <3

P.S. I LOVE IT!!!

Sorry. I'm hyper. Chocolate much...

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-05-09 08:35:25 +0000 UTC]

well you just had a poem nammed after you, eat as much chocolate as you wish

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violetennis1 In reply to ZOOBR [2011-05-11 23:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Chocolate=heaven on earth Sadly it =calories too

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-05-12 08:50:51 +0000 UTC]

run ??

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violetennis1 [2011-04-19 00:42:23 +0000 UTC]

I love this. I have no idea why I can't stop reading it. I swear I've memorized it by now...How do you come up with awesome stuff like this?!?!?! Me is so jealous

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-04-19 08:59:28 +0000 UTC]

well its always gonna be here for you to read , lol dont be jealous, im not really talented, (relly i just threw words together and hoped for the best, i cant even spell well, its auto correct that dose most of the work

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violetennis1 In reply to ZOOBR [2011-04-26 22:26:34 +0000 UTC]

You are talented!!! And besides that's what auto correct is for. For some reason the red squiggly lines under my words annoy me, so I always try and get rid of them...and when I'm lazy I use Voice Control to type. Sorry, I'm completely off topic...

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-04-27 08:49:30 +0000 UTC]

OMG THERES A VOICE CONTROL ?!?!?!!...why do people not tell me these things ???, there kinda a part of me now, if i dont see at least 3 in a txt box thing i feel slightly smarter and it feels odd haha

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violetennis1 In reply to ZOOBR [2011-04-28 00:36:06 +0000 UTC]

LOL well you have to download Speech Recognition, but close enough.
I feel like a genius now

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-04-28 12:40:04 +0000 UTC]

lol ok gettin to technical for me now haha , umm well i dont know maybe because YOU ARE A GENIUS PERHAPS

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violetennis1 In reply to ZOOBR [2011-04-28 20:03:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so...but my math teacher doesn't Evil teachers.

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-04-29 08:38:01 +0000 UTC]

nothing a quick axe to the head cant fix , how else would a guy like me get through English class haha

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violetennis1 In reply to ZOOBR [2011-05-11 23:39:53 +0000 UTC]

LOL I don't even get why they make us learn how to spell right, that's what the Internet is for...

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-05-12 08:46:53 +0000 UTC]

i dont even know why we go to school, google is everywhere these days haha

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violetennis1 In reply to ZOOBR [2011-08-19 03:03:07 +0000 UTC]

IKR. Someday, we'll stop wasting paper with all these textbooks and just gets iPads.

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-08-21 01:01:48 +0000 UTC]

someday lol

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violetennis1 [2011-02-08 23:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, "One More Dance"?
I dunno...I'm not that great with titles.
I love it though, it has that quality that makes it seems like there's more to it than you know.

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ZOOBR In reply to violetennis1 [2011-02-09 00:41:43 +0000 UTC]

i was thinking one ore dance but idk feels like somethings missing

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vrstringer [2011-02-06 07:56:18 +0000 UTC]

beautiful
maybe "When rain made us dance" or "Sometimes I remember what it felt like back then..."
hahaha I don't know, I'm pretty shit at making up titles for my own work hope it helps!

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ZOOBR In reply to vrstringer [2011-02-06 12:59:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks , yer im usually alright with titles but idk bout this one, something will pop up that suits it thanks for the ideas

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