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Zorepheus — Athum
Published: 2019-03-15 03:27:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 327; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Another try with glowing hair/fire hair thing. This time looks a little more like lava or something like that. More molten xDCompared to the first one, this is a little more harsher. I feel like I could have done a little bit more around the armor, give more detail around those parts or something. maybe some more lighting to make the armor pop a little more.
Anywhoo, hope you like!
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Hey, I'm here from ProjectComment Amazing job on this piece! I love the lighting, very well spread out and executed! I love the overall feel of this piece, it has a nice glow to it, besides the fire XD I love the way you've done the eyes they have a nice shine to them, and a beautiful colour of green you chose, now there is a bit of critique I can give too, so the eyes feel a little bit too far apart, they could have been moved a little bit more inward, along of course with the eyebrows, but besides that, to be honest it's pretty amazing! I love the way you drew the nose, it has a nice shape to it, and the light is great, I do feel like there could have been more shadows on this piece, particular on the armor or clothing part, and on the bottom of the face area, but still the shading and lighting that is there is still super great. Now my absolute favourite part of this piece, the part that really caught my eye and the main reason for this piece, is the fire hair! Now wow! that really amazed me, like the amount of detail put into it is seriously super amazing, Especially the yellow in the fire is a really nice colour, and I love all the flames and how many there are! It's honestly really stunning.
And I think it does look like fire and not lava, I think you did a great job on it! I definitely love this piece and it deserves more attention! I'm giving it a fav! Also, the background colour was well picked it makes the light of the fire stand out more, which shows you have a good sense of background lighting and just light and dark colouring overall! Once again great job, This piece has a lot of detail and is really amazing.
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Thanks so much for the kind words! 
Lol yeah now that you mentioned it, the eyes do look rather far.
Definitely could of done more with armor and neck area, mostly do to rushing it, but I guess that's no excuse
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No problem! I hope my constructive criticism helped, and in no way was I trying to be mean, it was only for the purpose of improving! I hope I did help
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You did not come off as mean, it was very helpful, thank you!
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