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Published: 2005-08-11 09:43:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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PREDATORI am the predator.
As I lurk through the thick jungles of my brain, I prey upon my weaknesses.
I stalk them for days, following their every move.
I become one with these weaknesses.
I become enraged as I learn of my demise.
My sanity and insanity are now one.
I see them now.
The time is right for an attack.
I pounce on them with all my might.
They are the killer’s prey.
I rip them to pieces and then indulge myself with their fresh, juicy, and bloody pieces of flesh I tore from their bones.
I feel the juices running down my neck and it cools me down.
When done, I stand up and release the sound of a lion’s roar from my diaphragm.
I have felt and tasted the prey; never will I go back to being life’s prey, for I am a predator.
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Your a Zeltaurian my sweet
you know not defeat
you make peace with tresspassers
but first make them pay
you feast on stampedes
and you call that prey?
you sculpt you home out of rock
throw boulders at live stock
and you have a staff of countless many
for you can rule any
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I must disagree with ~Akuard. I thought this was well written and I enjoyed it. It was clear, graphic and easily understood. I thought it was a great way to visualise over-coming ones inner weaknesses.
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thankx. the most difficult challenge to overcome is one's inner weaknesses. i have been the victim or prey all my life and my best friend, boznic-who is on deviant, told me it is time to become the predator. my first step in becoming one was to write this poem. i wanted it to be graphic, and i'm glad it was clear to you.
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Yet the predator preys upon him(or her)self?
Seems a bit awkward to me. Of coruse, I think that this could be made prose, as I see no petry in it.
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it might or might not be a poem, it could be more of a statement. what i was trying to get across, was that most of my life, i have been a victim or the prey. lately, my best friend boznic, who is also on deviant, told me it is time to take a stand and become the predator. i want to defend myself and i want to stop the hurt and pain. i wanted it to be semi-explicit. sorry if i didn't make it clear enough for you, but this is what i meant.
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