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A commission for GJTProductions , we are planning this to be a continuing series of comics. They did the script and I did the visual art.
Tempest may have been a villain, but this is FiM, and they love to reform villains there, so it's just logical that she cutely jumps on that wagon (like in this: derpibooru.org/1514712?q=spoil… ).


Commissions open!: zsparkonequus.deviantart.com/j…

Sketched traditionally in pencil and digitally in Paint Tool SAI 1.2.5 with a BAMBOO CTL-470. Colored and shaded with Photoshop CS4.
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Comments: 52

Isseus [2018-09-07 08:52:41 +0000 UTC]

That chibi-Tempest in the second panel. Y U MAEK PONE SO CUTES!?

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Madness-Made-Fresh [2018-06-21 03:05:16 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic.

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Deadpone [2018-06-04 20:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Always works. XD

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Indioman200 [2018-04-28 04:47:38 +0000 UTC]

 Here is an idea, Twi: Make her captain of your Royal Guard.
 But, I don´t have a Royal Guard.
 Well, now you have somepony to start it.

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Darkvader2016 In reply to Indioman200 [2019-04-18 17:00:04 +0000 UTC]

That’s actually not a bad idea.

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OddEyesDragoon [2018-03-28 05:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god,
That face in the 2nd panel, though.

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GJTProductions In reply to OddEyesDragoon [2018-04-03 00:19:37 +0000 UTC]

Twilight dusted off the emotional manipulation skills she doubtless used extensively on her "Big Brother Best Friend Forever" when both of them were young because, like with Thorax at first, she's asking Shining to go WAY out on a limb with Tempest here. And of course, Tempest is a willing accomplice because she doesn't have a better idea of what she should be doing now...

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NoradTwo [2018-03-20 17:45:29 +0000 UTC]

He teaches Tempest how the Royal Guard works currently (police, monster patrol, frontier exploration), and she then uses this knowledge to make informed suggestions on how to improve it based on her own experience. 

It totally works!

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AJR001 [2018-03-20 13:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry Shining Armor, Twilight will pay you to train Fizzlepop.

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GJTProductions In reply to AJR001 [2018-03-21 01:19:57 +0000 UTC]

"Who said anything about PAYING him?"
"Oh ha ha, you're REAL funny, Twily. I am NOT doing this for free!"

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meiyeezhu [2018-03-20 06:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Her face makes a great tazer! You sure you don't want to pass off that offer??

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Tlapiaskatl [2018-03-20 02:34:54 +0000 UTC]

Ok, that could be cool. XD

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Toonwatcher [2018-03-20 00:58:43 +0000 UTC]

I figured she could try out for buckball, but this works too.

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jimmyhook19202122 [2018-03-19 22:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Come on Hasbro! BRING TEMPEST INTO FIM!!!

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titan70 In reply to jimmyhook19202122 [2018-06-07 07:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Not going to happen. Her voice actress is too expensive. And Tempest is too big a character to switch voice actress'.

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Darkvader2016 In reply to titan70 [2019-03-07 14:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Then get another voice actress who’s like Emily Blunt.

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Hordaks-Pupil [2018-03-19 20:55:22 +0000 UTC]

No pony can resist the sad puppy face

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GJTProductions In reply to Hordaks-Pupil [2018-03-20 17:15:47 +0000 UTC]


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Hordaks-Pupil In reply to GJTProductions [2018-03-20 18:41:26 +0000 UTC]

 

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HunterBrony101 [2018-03-19 18:58:48 +0000 UTC]

When's part two? 

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ZSparkonequus In reply to HunterBrony101 [2018-03-20 20:16:06 +0000 UTC]

It all comes down to the commissioner ordering it.

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ZanarNaryon [2018-03-19 14:35:30 +0000 UTC]

"Besides, she might become your sister-in-law"
"WHAT?"
"NOTHING!"

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ZSparkonequus In reply to ZanarNaryon [2018-03-20 20:14:40 +0000 UTC]

That would be cute!

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titan70 In reply to ZSparkonequus [2018-06-07 07:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Nah. If Twilight marries anypony, it will be Starlight,

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MDWebster [2018-03-19 14:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Cute face, it almost always wins the heart of the stallion.

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ZSparkonequus In reply to MDWebster [2018-03-20 20:14:07 +0000 UTC]

^^

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MARoy [2018-03-19 13:49:15 +0000 UTC]

oh celestia bless the ponies tempest gets to train 

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Geobukseon [2018-03-19 13:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Someone has to tell her 'no'.

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tigreanpony [2018-03-19 12:37:44 +0000 UTC]

That was great, and I love Tempests face in the second panel. Sorry Shining but those eyes are weapons you can't ignore. Great work here.

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ZSparkonequus In reply to tigreanpony [2018-03-20 20:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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GJTProductions In reply to tigreanpony [2018-03-20 17:14:56 +0000 UTC]

"YOU DON'T THINK I DON'T KNOW THAT? This is my LITTLE SISTER involved for crying out loud here! "

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EqDBot [2018-03-19 12:20:07 +0000 UTC]

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Nightshroud [2018-03-19 12:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Shouldn't "Fizzletop" be set into war captivity or something?

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ZSparkonequus In reply to Nightshroud [2018-03-20 20:12:59 +0000 UTC]

They are more into the reform thing I guess.

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alexandermon In reply to Nightshroud [2018-03-19 12:21:09 +0000 UTC]

But she is friends with a Princess of Equestria. That's very close to a pardon in this country. (Most likely a full pardon with no consequences whatsoever, except some mistrust from some sector of the population. Actually, being a threat to Equestria seems like the fastest way to get a scholarship to be student with princess Twilight)

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Nightshroud In reply to alexandermon [2018-03-19 12:43:51 +0000 UTC]

alexandermon Yeah, but on the other hand, the ponies weaponized friendship into a death beam. So I'm not shure about this.

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IBAIPshow [2018-03-18 09:23:05 +0000 UTC]

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PhoenixFlambe [2018-03-17 15:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Thou shall not resist ze eyes.

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GJTProductions In reply to PhoenixFlambe [2018-03-18 00:59:17 +0000 UTC]

"She fights dirty with those, I tell you! Not fair at all! "

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PonyTatsujin [2018-03-17 15:01:23 +0000 UTC]

NO!! THE PUPPY DOG EYES!!

MY ONLY WEAKNESS!!

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GJTProductions In reply to PonyTatsujin [2018-03-18 00:58:06 +0000 UTC]

"I don't need to resort to the high-level 'Royal Authority' spell when the lower-level 'Emotional Blackmail' is more effective in this situation!"
"DON'T YOU START WITH THE O&O REFERENCES, MISS NERDLIGHT SPARKLE! "

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Deviaman In reply to GJTProductions [2019-09-03 22:34:03 +0000 UTC]

What's O&O?

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GJTProductions In reply to Deviaman [2019-09-04 00:11:05 +0000 UTC]

"Oubliettes & Ogres" (or "Ogres & Oubliettes", depending on whether you're watching the show or reading the comics). It's the pony version of Dungeons & Dragons (D&D).

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PonyTatsujin In reply to GJTProductions [2018-03-19 07:42:36 +0000 UTC]

...best reply I've ever gotten!

⛤⛤⛤⛤⛤
A+!

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Renginer [2018-03-17 11:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Just look at the 4th panel. Could anyone really say no to these faces?

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ZSparkonequus In reply to Renginer [2018-03-20 20:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Weaponized cuteness is best cuteness! 

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Darigaaz-the-Igniter [2018-03-17 05:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Double Puppy Dog Eyes!

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dragonlover123173 In reply to Darigaaz-the-Igniter [2018-03-17 05:32:01 +0000 UTC]

And the pouty lips too, Shining didn't stand a chance.

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jppiper [2018-03-17 04:09:35 +0000 UTC]

How many pages will there be?

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GJTProductions In reply to jppiper [2018-03-18 00:50:25 +0000 UTC]

It all depends on my creative and monetary resources, really.

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