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Rabbwit [2020-02-22 09:51:45 +0000 UTC]

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AxceI [2020-02-17 00:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! I'm from ! And wow! This piece looks like it's from a comic! *Reads the description* Oh..so it actually is. Webcomics are awesome! I like the pastel color palette you have chosen here, very light and airy colors. The background is probably my most favorite part to be honest, to me it looks like backgrounds and storytelling are one of your key strengths. The background provides a lot of depth to the piece, and the shading (especially on the right side) definitely helps bring out the depth even further. I like the position you've chosen for the art, it's a pretty unique angle. 
Alrighty, moving on to the critique part. I feel like the shoulder on the person with the long hair is a little off on the left side. I think it needs to be brought up a little bit. I was reading the comments and noticed that this was meant to be a scene about arguing. I can kinda see what you're talking about but I don't really get that arguing and tense vibe if that makes sense. I think it's because of the facial features of the person with the short hair, if you were to exaggerate them more then I think it would help set the mood. 
Other than that, excellent work!! Keep up the awesomeness and I hope this helps.

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HopeDiamond3 [2020-02-14 03:44:24 +0000 UTC]

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