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Zuhrah — ++ Tales of Times ++
Published: 2013-06-30 15:50:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1005; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 8
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Please full view!!Work in progress for the 'Tales of Time' poster. Supposed to be a one shot that I am working on with a friend. Still in design and story concept stage. About a girl who travels into different times and world with a group of people.
I am doing this for fun. Feel free to comment all you want since I need to improve my skills.
You may colour this if you want. Just remember to inform me.
Sketch: HB pencil
Inking: Sakura Micron 0.05mm to 0.5 mm + cleaning and touch ups in Photoshop CS 3
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Comments: 23
Really beautiful work. The only thin I'd have to point out is the hand of the woman holding the pipe. It looks like... a right hand on a left arm. (the way she's holding it, if that was her right arm it would make sense, otherwise the thumb should be pointing towards the viewer. I'm one to talk though... I understand that sometimes when you get a hand just perfect... there hesitation to erase it, even if it's on the wrong arm
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I took note on this and corrected the hand in the colored version. 
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ah, ok
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Awwww. This is totally cool. How can you make line art so clean and thin like that? ♥
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Aaawwwww.. this is totally coooollllll ♥♥♥
How can you nake the line art look so thin and soft like that?? O v O
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Aaawwwww.. this is totally coooollllll ♥♥♥
How can you nake the line art look so thin and soft like that?? O v O
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Aaawwwww.. this is totally coooollllll ♥♥♥
How can you nake the line art look so thin and soft like that?? O v O
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Aaawwwww.. this is totally coooollllll ♥♥♥
How can you nake the line art look so thin and soft like that?? O v O
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Wow your line work is incredible! My only suggestion is to re-visit the anatomy, especially in the arms. In some places it's a little tricky
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Thank you! I shall take note.
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Fantastically done! Looking forward to the story making!
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Wow, wow, wow! I love the detail and the linework- It's so clean!!! X3 I especially like how you drew the hair and accessories *Thumbs up* ! Awesome work!
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Very nice artwork!Your lines are so frickin' sharp and sexy!!Do you polish a lot on PS or it's mainly manual work? Again really nice!
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I think I spend more time on the manual work. The softening and cleaning via photoshop takes some time too but not as much as the manual work.
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Incredible work on the modulated lines! It keeps the piece interesting. Maybe you could try different noses or eyes for the three kids at the bottom; a problem most common it's that characters tend to look alike between them. The design is also good, specialy clothes and weapons!! Really fascinating, as well as the drapery <3
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Thank you so much for the critique! I shall take note.
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oh no problem, your style is very detailed, I really like it. Keep up the good work!
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