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Published: 2010-10-29 08:36:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 839; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 455
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Aren't you proud of me?
So yeah, I had another go at gimp and I think I'm finally getting the hang of things!
And I know I'm still no expert, that's why critiques would be nice
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X3 the outfits are really cute, especially Sakura's. It looks like you really worked on the design well, you planned it out, then reviewed it, then made changes in some places. The colors are cute, too.
But PLEASE remember this!!!!
I've seen in most of your drawings that your characters have the same pose : their head slightly tilted, their hands behind their backs, not showing feet, and their mouth closed. You need to explore more poses, because (no offense) the poses get kinda old. Look at fashion magazines and find full body poses, then, get a blank sheet of paper and try to copy the pose, but dont add detail to it. Make the head a circle, and make your shoulders, elbows, knees, legs, waist, and chest circles. Some tutorials on dA will help you with that. Make sure its all stick figure like. It will help you, trust me, then you can use different poses in many ways. If you need help, tell me, and ill post and example for u on dA.
Overall, watch out for poses, and i hope to see more of this soon!
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Thanks, Duna-chan for the critique! I agree they do look very similar (the reason I draw more than I post DX) and I'll definitely start to really work on my poses (and antonymy) because those are some of my weaknesses in drawing. Also, do you know of any good tutorials, I could only find ones for portraits and shading?
Again, thanks for the critique, I need people to tell me these things to help me get better!
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Teehee no prob, and i think my teacher has a lives stream on anatomy...i'll go check it out.....
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YAY! Thanks Duna-chan!
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It's cute but why is she wearing her season one outfit?
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Aww, thanks so much~!
But it's not her season one outfit, it is similar at the top. But when you look at the bottom it's different (though all Sakura's shirts are the same anyway).
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