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Published: 2007-08-13 14:26:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2406; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 18
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Description okay, tell me if you think it should be put in mature for violence or blood or whatever cause I personally don't think it should, but maybe you do. here's the drabble. plus I'm putting in number 3 with it cause they go together and I know I probably won't do a picture for it.

I want to shine, I want to be able to simply help people, help myself, I want to really live. It's too late for that now, the sun is setting on my life. I prince Zuko, banished heir to the Fire Nation throne am dying, dying because I was stupid and tried to help the avatar, tried to kill my father, tried to free my nation.
The water tribe peasant, a woman I would've asked to love me forever if I'd lived, walks up sadly and cradles my head in her arms, crying openly over me. It's to late to love her the way I should have, it's too late to even move. "It's too late to save you Zuko," she whispers, her voice coated thick with tears, "it's too late to love you the way I should have." Her words echo my thoughts. "I'm dieing too, my love, I'm almost dead. No ne can help us, no one can seperate us.
Suddenly, quietly, her lips swoop down and seal over mine. I can't move, I can't give her any aknowledgement, but finally, for once I shine, my life finally has a meaning, just as the last of me leaves this horrible existence and I float away, flying on golden wings. Soon, she joins me, her blue, almost silver wings hover beside mine and finally we can love the way we were meant to.

3-sheets
There would be no funeral for the Prince or water peasants, the Avatar's corpse, however would be hung on the outer wall, a demonstartion of the Firenation's power. Princess Azula looks down at her brother's body and slowly touches his face. "You ended up on the right side, didn't you? You died for something you believed in and now I am stuck alone in the palace with father. He's changed Zuko, I've changed too. I'm finished with this war, It's practically killed us all. But father doesn't see it that way, Father just wants to anhilate the Earth Kingdom, he's crueller now, colder. He won't stay on the throne forever though, brother. Soon, I'll finish what you and the Avatar started."
Mai walks in alone, Ty lee had been killed in the battle. "Princess Azula, you're wound needs treated now." Azula gets up and winces slightly at the pain. She'd recieved a rather nasty gash in her side and had almost died from it.
As Azula's steps fade off into the distance, Mai walks up beside Zuko's corpse. She'd heard what Azula had said, but she wouldn't betray her, she owed the princess her life. Besides, the emotionless assassin has no loyalty with the Fire Lord, he had killed his own son.
Mai just stands there, never speaking, never blinking, staring down at the dead prince. He could have lived if not for Ozai, he could have lived. Quickly, she covers his face with the red sheet he'd been laid under and walks off. Azula wouldn't have to commit treason alone.


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Comments: 86

zukocats22 In reply to ??? [2011-12-30 02:13:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you. I know it's really late to reply to this but I'm at a new account and came to check this one. Thank you

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bigoth [2008-11-30 08:57:19 +0000 UTC]

I like it the shading for the background is nice. Plus you really got it to look like the guy is looking down on the other person.

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zukocats22 In reply to bigoth [2008-11-30 23:41:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks, this is such an oooold picture thoXD ummm, that's a girl...... but they both look funny

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bigoth In reply to zukocats22 [2008-11-30 23:45:02 +0000 UTC]

xD my bad lol


But its still a nice positioning of the people.

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zukocats22 In reply to bigoth [2008-11-30 23:51:17 +0000 UTC]

nah nah nah, it's fine!!

lol thanks

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mysteriousoddity [2008-03-26 16:51:27 +0000 UTC]

omg, i swear that wuz the most amazing ending anything could possibly have.

im in love with it...

omigod.
omi freakin god.

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zukocats22 In reply to mysteriousoddity [2008-03-27 10:51:18 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm really glad you liked it!!! I love doing surprise endings!

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mysteriousoddity In reply to zukocats22 [2008-03-27 17:50:27 +0000 UTC]

yea...that wuz an amazing ending.....

although i never rillee imagined azula finishing what zuko started....she ruthless, man. rutheless.

still, it made me wanna cry, it wuz sooooooooooo cute!!!!!

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zukocats22 In reply to mysteriousoddity [2008-05-01 10:48:11 +0000 UTC]

yeah, azula doeesn't really seem like that. maybe she had a change of heart.........maybe........it's slightly possible. XD did you see the finale trailer? azula had a tantrum it was so funny! and if you wanna see up to 15 go to [link] it's amazing!!!!! episode 15, or at least the end is wonderful. it was about mai and I'm sorry but now I'm a total maizu shipper because mai got sooooo much awesomer and it make sense for her and zuko to be together now.

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mysteriousoddity In reply to zukocats22 [2008-05-01 18:25:09 +0000 UTC]

yea, that was the most amazing episode evah.

im still a rabid zutarian, but mai has completely redeemed herself from being an emo lump.

I EVN PUT HER LINE IN MY SIG! WHEEEE!!!!!!!

and mai x zuko is called maiko, fewl.

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zukocats22 In reply to mysteriousoddity [2008-05-12 10:16:49 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAHHHH!!!! kewl! I was split in two anyway, so I just figured that maizu makes sense now, so why shouldn't i thappen. (it can be either maizu or maiko, it doesn't really matter)

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mysteriousoddity In reply to zukocats22 [2008-05-13 01:08:58 +0000 UTC]

*sob*

I HATE SPOILERS!

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HarunoSakura14007 [2008-01-01 03:34:33 +0000 UTC]

I really like it, but is it Mai or Katara?

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zukocats22 In reply to HarunoSakura14007 [2008-01-01 05:46:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it goes along with the drabble in the comments. it's katara

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xoxavatar10xox [2007-11-21 16:23:00 +0000 UTC]

np

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xoxavatar10xox [2007-11-18 20:19:52 +0000 UTC]

i love the zutara part

it made me want to cry

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xoxavatar10xox [2007-11-18 20:18:29 +0000 UTC]

i love the zutara part

it made me want to cry

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zukocats22 In reply to xoxavatar10xox [2007-11-21 16:13:11 +0000 UTC]

ooh I'm sorry but thank you too! just the final battle of the war has me so excited, there are so many possibilities

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xoxavatar10xox In reply to zukocats22 [2008-01-18 18:51:49 +0000 UTC]

np, are u a zutarian? i am =], or are u maiko myt sis is =], I AM EXCITED TO, now zuzu is good, katara is being way mean to zuko =3 poor zuko

U R SUCH A GOOD DRAWER

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zukocats22 In reply to xoxavatar10xox [2008-03-27 10:50:34 +0000 UTC]

yup, I'm a zutarian!!!!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!!! I can't wait to see what'll happen between them!!!!!!! yeah, she is, KATARA BE NICER!!!!!!.....I don't think she heard me

thanks!

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xoxavatar10xox In reply to zukocats22 [2008-03-27 19:55:30 +0000 UTC]

yay lol, zutara 4 lyf

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spucko [2007-11-07 21:18:39 +0000 UTC]

The shading is nice...wish I could do that. yeah this is my fav.

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zukocats22 In reply to spucko [2007-11-14 00:25:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks just practice

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Katara-club [2007-09-27 18:53:30 +0000 UTC]

ZUTARA RULES 4EVA

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zukocats22 In reply to Katara-club [2007-09-28 21:24:03 +0000 UTC]

*rolls eyes*

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zukoandtay [2007-09-25 01:10:24 +0000 UTC]

IT'S SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!

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zukocats22 In reply to zukoandtay [2007-09-28 00:57:32 +0000 UTC]

I know it was making me all sad

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remuslupinlover [2007-09-08 21:34:00 +0000 UTC]

awwwww... that one's still in your notebook......right?

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zukocats22 In reply to remuslupinlover [2007-09-08 21:51:47 +0000 UTC]

yup, u like the drabbles

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kateison [2007-08-30 01:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!

Love the idea <3

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zukocats22 In reply to kateison [2007-08-30 22:00:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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kateison In reply to zukocats22 [2007-09-03 17:00:06 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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maizu4ever [2007-08-16 05:00:55 +0000 UTC]

u r one of my friends and you should know I never read the artists comment so i dont know who that girl is but that better not be katara

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zukocats22 In reply to maizu4ever [2007-08-20 13:57:22 +0000 UTC]

uh yes it is they're both supposed to be dieing can u still comment on this account or not?

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maizu4ever In reply to zukocats22 [2007-09-14 22:40:27 +0000 UTC]

ya kk bak but gir I dont liek katara lol good pic though

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zukocats22 In reply to maizu4ever [2007-09-28 21:23:39 +0000 UTC]

yay ur back!!!! I don't like her either she's so annoying

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maizu4ever In reply to zukocats22 [2007-10-15 01:56:31 +0000 UTC]

then why did u put them togather?

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zukocats22 In reply to maizu4ever [2007-10-19 20:12:39 +0000 UTC]

because they're fun to draw together even if I don't support them. they're cute while maizu is practical. but look on the bright side, here katara is dyeing

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maizu4ever In reply to zukocats22 [2007-10-22 23:22:27 +0000 UTC]

ya thats true...u can do whatever u want i just was curious!

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zukocats22 In reply to maizu4ever [2007-10-29 09:41:22 +0000 UTC]

curiosity is good

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maizu4ever In reply to zukocats22 [2007-11-13 00:02:18 +0000 UTC]

ya sometimes

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aShifted-Reality [2007-08-15 14:06:01 +0000 UTC]

hmmm not so strong.

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zukocats22 In reply to aShifted-Reality [2007-08-15 15:10:44 +0000 UTC]

as what?

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aShifted-Reality In reply to zukocats22 [2007-08-15 15:14:40 +0000 UTC]

the drawing.

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zukocats22 In reply to aShifted-Reality [2007-08-15 16:11:13 +0000 UTC]

what's not as strong as what? I'm srry but ur confusing me

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aShifted-Reality In reply to zukocats22 [2007-08-15 16:50:30 +0000 UTC]

nevermind

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zukocats22 In reply to aShifted-Reality [2007-08-20 14:07:11 +0000 UTC]

kk

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Anoya [2007-08-15 10:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice details and lining. I don't think it's mature content. Nice quote indeed, fits the drawing very good

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zukocats22 In reply to Anoya [2007-08-15 13:36:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Anoya In reply to zukocats22 [2007-08-15 13:39:54 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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