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Published: 2010-01-07 08:13:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 695; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 6
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- Read Left to Right
Page 1,2 : [link]
Page 3,4 : [link]
Page 5,6 : viewing
Page 7,8 : [link]
Page 9,10 : [link]
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REMNANT oct ; *Remnant-OCT
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the sketchyness is amaazing ; A ;! I love the expresssionsssssssssss~ i love youuuuuuuuuuu
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The right-hand pic is just too awesomely eyecatching... xD
So ya, I spent quite a bit of time staring at it and wondering what the heck is happening, before I remembered I should go read the left hand page first. xP
So... perhaps, if you could push that pic to become a left hand page instead... think that'll be really good.
and I'm still loving the beautiful hatching. >w<
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ooooooh, like when you turn the page and then 'BOOM!' ?
i'll remember to add that, good tip thanks :'D
my hatching was an excuse- to add abit of rendering for 'plain lineart', or a standby remedy to 'full B&W inking' i dunno why some liked it.. but i'll try to develop a style for that then :V
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"BOOM" yep yep. Impact++ xD
The hatching patterns are very nice! Hmmm, perhaps, cos it adds interest and volume, and is also more "restful" on the eyes than solid blacks n whites... of course your solid black/white stuff are still wonderful, but I guess this kinda adds another feel, if you would incorporate it in... ^^
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Between the last panel in 7 and page 8, what happens gets rather confusing unless you read it a few times over and it kills the flow of the comic.
It would be a good idea to show a little transition between actions, maybe showing the skeleton moving and the priest reacting before just having the skeleton on him... you know? *hopes that makes sense*
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If i had the time, i'd be redoing the whole audition
I understand what you mean about the flow of the whole sequence.. I admit- i was forcibly cutting down on pages/panels, so alot of scenes were just cut out of the actual version to shorten time of production. Guess I just killed myself, and readers eh.
Thanks for the time and comment, will work it through again hehe
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omggggggggggg!!!
loool i'd totally freak out!!!
so cool *A*
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i sorta got the flow messed up D;
the OMNOMNOM could've been more impactful.. well.. gonna redo it soon ^_^
thanks for reading <3
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