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Zyllae — Game of Pretend
Published: 2006-05-27 19:15:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description Let's play this game of pretend.
Make believe our world away.
Dream about reality.
Let's play this game called pretend...
Close your eyes, try not to feel.
Breathe but lightly, or not at all.
We're in this game of pretend.
Hooked on not seeing,
What is made to be seen.
This game, this game of pretend.
Has wrapped itself around us so.
And readily, we -
Play this game of pretend.
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Comments: 15

MatsyTheDoctor [2006-05-27 20:36:50 +0000 UTC]

I just wonderin

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Zyllae In reply to MatsyTheDoctor [2006-05-27 21:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Heh? Just wonderin' what? Lol.

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MatsyTheDoctor In reply to Zyllae [2006-05-27 23:28:10 +0000 UTC]

I was showing the mistake i made lol

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Zyllae In reply to MatsyTheDoctor [2006-05-28 00:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh.. I still confused lol but oh well XD

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MatsyTheDoctor In reply to Zyllae [2006-05-28 03:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Same here lol XD

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MatsyTheDoctor [2006-05-27 20:22:34 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Great job.

Can you try to make it longer?

It's a great poem though

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Zyllae In reply to MatsyTheDoctor [2006-05-27 21:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Thankses! Yeah, I was planning to make it longer too lol. And to have more references to drugs ... and such. But I didn't want to destroy this version, because I liked it. But version two will be comin' soon

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MatsyTheDoctor In reply to Zyllae [2006-05-27 23:27:16 +0000 UTC]

I'll be watching.. lol

I mean I'll be ready for your fantasic work.



I love you like a sister!

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Zyllae In reply to MatsyTheDoctor [2006-05-28 00:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Loves ya like a sister toooo! ^^ How did I miss catching you? I was gone and you were on and now I'm on and you're gone! Lol

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MatsyTheDoctor In reply to Zyllae [2006-05-28 03:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Sorry.. I went to a movie and my computer was lagging sooooooooooooo much!

I'm sorry...



I love you too, but I didn't mean to miss you!

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NanoDarkk [2006-05-27 19:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Kool! Me likey! X3

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Zyllae In reply to NanoDarkk [2006-05-27 22:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was going to make it longer, but I liked this version too much. I'm doing another version of it though ... hopefully .. lol

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NanoDarkk In reply to Zyllae [2006-05-28 01:38:03 +0000 UTC]

lolz ^w^

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neo-tek [2006-05-27 19:17:26 +0000 UTC]

i like the concept alot, maybe a longer piece with more alliteration and metaphor to wrap the meaning up...i like it.

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Zyllae In reply to neo-tek [2006-05-27 21:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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