TobyandMavisforever In reply to ??? [2017-09-21 00:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I think it would go something like this (if he does bring the kits back)

"Bumblekit, Beekit!" Robinpaw cried happily, "Thank StarClan you're safe."

"My babies!" Honeywish nuzzled both her kits with relief. "Come on now, I have some food stocked for you in the prey pile."

"Do you have a cardinal?" Beekit buzzed excitedly. "Ooh, a gecko? A spiny turtle."

Bumblekit just giggled and followed his hyper little brother.

"Thank you, Bertram." Robinpaw purred, "thank you for saving our clan's little ones, and BranchClan's kits too." She glanced over at where Dawnstep, Otterslip and Seawhisper were sniffing and nuzzling their kits with relief. "I know you're a true warrior now."

Bertram blushed bright red through his fur. Would now be a good time to...

"With your bravery," Robinpaw continued, "any she-cat would be proud to have you as their mate."

"Well..." Bertram stiffened a bit. "I'm glad you said that because... Robinpaw, no other cat in this clan has shown more compassion and kindness in their soul than you. You have treated me like one of the clan since we met. I was wondering if..." he swept into a bow, "would you be my soul-mate in the clan?"

Robinpaw shifted her gaze away, as if she was trying to hold back tears.

"I'm sorry, Bertram..." she sighed, "I am an apprentice, and if they have kits, that will take them away from their training. On top of that, when I do receive my medicine cat name, medicine cats cannot have kits or a mate. We have to treat the entire clan as our kits, and to keep peace between all cats."

(And... well, that's where I get stuck)

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newdullcrusader In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2017-09-23 17:08:50 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Especially since you added in Honeywish's reactions to her kids coming back.

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to newdullcrusader [2017-09-23 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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newdullcrusader In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2017-09-21 00:11:54 +0000 UTC]

Ah sorry gtg, talk to you tomorrow

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to newdullcrusader [2017-09-21 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Ok, catch ya later, and tell me what you think of the comment.

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to ??? [2017-09-20 22:13:57 +0000 UTC]

For the zombie bloopers, I think the funniest one was:

"Redkit got hit by-- apparently a full moon." And then she realises zombies will start popping up during the 'fire scenes of doom'!

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KagomeKageThief In reply to ??? [2017-08-19 19:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the spam of favourites!   

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newdullcrusader In reply to KagomeKageThief [2017-08-19 22:08:10 +0000 UTC]

No prob, I just love to favorite stories and things like that     

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newdullcrusader In reply to GanashiAshaka [2017-08-12 00:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Np, great art deserves love  

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newdullcrusader In reply to Chezamoon18 [2017-06-22 23:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Np, I just liked the pic

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WAr-cat In reply to ??? [2016-12-18 02:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks for the watch

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newdullcrusader In reply to WAr-cat [2016-12-24 01:47:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the favorite <3

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