keen [2002-09-03 11:54:06 +0000 UTC]

hey volantis,
thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comment. you rock man.
ciao,
k

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technodepth [2002-09-01 10:04:31 +0000 UTC]

BTW, I got your 500th page view

If you want me to upload it, I will.

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technodepth [2002-09-01 10:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Heh, the first poem I submitted on dA when I joined up late last year got Daily Poem (early version of DD)...En Guard if you're interested...and my second one was my entry to the Fella's Second B-day comp.....got second place, a deviantart e-mail account, 6 month subscription, t-shirt and DD....I was pretty damn stoked once over that.

Congratulations once again on your third DD.....you deserve a showering of and

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technodepth [2002-08-31 11:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, ya did get a bit of the old DD. Even so poetry, even featured poetry, never gets the response of other forms of art on here....or most other places....

That is your third DD, if I'm not mistaken?

yeah.

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technodepth [2002-08-29 11:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Cheers for the comment on Soar. After your suggestion, I did spot one typo...'embace' should be 'embrace'.

I put it in lyrical because in my head it did go to a tune. I just thought it was better there than anywhere else.



Anyway, how've ya been??

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meic2 [2002-08-26 20:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for your perceptive comment on PENNY FOR YOUR THOUGHTS. Much appreciated. A quick glance shows me that you like many of the poets / writers I do. I promise I'll return and look at your work after I've caught up with comments.

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technodepth [2002-08-10 10:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, schoolwork sucks...I have huge piles of it as well at the mo....

'Buddhist caress' was intended to be fairly vague....it was meant to describe the atmosphere of it rather than an actual image. But I agree, it doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem all that well..




*Buddhist caress*

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summerdies [2002-08-10 07:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment and the heads up on the wording. I saved two copies of the poem and submitted the wrong one (2 changes icy and personal). Haven't seen anything new from you in a while, what's up?

(btw) your not really asexual are you ?!!

Thanks again and write something would you, I put you on my watch and then...nothing. Hope your not suffering from a bout of mental constipation!

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technodepth [2002-08-05 09:48:57 +0000 UTC]

What's wrong with the 'Buddhist caress'?

Thanks for the comment tho.

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deejbard [2002-08-04 13:34:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you. i do know what you mean, he just didn't fit into this poem. glad you liked it anyway -- mooncakes for all!

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technodepth [2002-07-27 12:58:42 +0000 UTC]

The exchange of hugs is good.



I'm glad you understand the poem better now I did make it deliberately abstract though. Blame it on the mood.

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technodepth [2002-07-27 10:52:08 +0000 UTC]

You didn't understand my 'Placebo Edge' poem?

I'll explain a little....the first three stanzas are written in the present, past and future tenses, respectively. They were inspired when I dropped a rock and it rolled under the computer desk to the back where all the wires are and there was cool air coming out from the fan. The rock was a piece of obsidian I was fiddling with. The 4th stanza came from me looking down after it I dropped it, and I was wearing jeans...which led to the 5th..and the final line summed up the mood I was in at the time. The rock (and stanzas about it) could be taken in a metaphorical or comparitive sense.

That help?

and once again, mucho thanks for the comment.

technodepth

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technodepth [2002-07-25 10:29:31 +0000 UTC]

hey....we have a emoticon? When did that happen??

hugs are good.

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venefica [2002-07-24 23:51:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your insightful comments on my poems. i LOVE your work, you have a magical way with words.

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technodepth [2002-07-24 11:09:42 +0000 UTC]

How did you manage to come along with a hug just when I needed one?? Thankyou for that.

And no worries for the comments...and thanks for all of yours as well.

May and be with you.

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namaste [2002-07-19 11:58:15 +0000 UTC]

much appreciation for your lovely comment on my hummingbird poem.

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summerdies [2002-07-19 05:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Your on my devwatch. Easily.

Your work rocks!

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between-balance [2002-07-15 04:30:52 +0000 UTC]

heh
i dont know

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technodepth [2002-04-23 10:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Hey dude, thanks for adding me to your DevWatch

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supul-sinac [2002-04-21 16:14:20 +0000 UTC]

i have to watch anyone whose sig says: Yes, I am weird.
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I just keep on running faster chasing the happily I am ever after.

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keen [2002-04-21 03:20:18 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks man. really appreciate your thoughtful comment!
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sink / implode:
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supul-sinac [2002-04-20 13:36:45 +0000 UTC]

looks like you've been doing some commenting recently, its the only way to get more comments yourself, or the best way anyway... so thanks for the comment with the smoking poem
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I just keep on running faster chasing the happily I am ever after.

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summerdies [2002-04-14 06:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Hey just wanted to stop by and say thanks again.
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Dreaming as the summer dies

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namaste [2002-04-11 01:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Hey! thanks so much for the comment on my sunset poem.

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technodepth [2002-04-06 09:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey dude, thanks for the comments....hope to see some more of your stuff soon

Technodepth

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littlemissle [2002-04-01 03:50:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the sweet comments you left on "it's a form of reaching" !!!
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ftwdesigns [2002-03-29 07:20:50 +0000 UTC]

i read 3 poems and like them all. if i liked poetry more, i would read all your shit.... i do have to say your consistent with being good... that's very unusual. but people who say asexual make me wanna pick one. nobody cares. but be a boi or a ghoul.

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