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# Statistics
Favourites: 35; Deviations: 1; Watchers: 0
Watching: 9; Pageviews: 2224; Comments Made: 427; Friends: 9
# Interests
Favorite movies: undecidedFavorite TV shows: How I Met Your Mother, Lucifer
Favorite bands / musical artists: none
Favorite books: Michael Vey, The Heir series, Fablehaven, The Unwanteds
Favorite writers: Farm-Fresh, clashmecha
Favorite games: Minecraft
Favorite gaming platform: Laptop
Tools of the Trade: none
Other Interests: plants, GMO's, Fungi, Dragons
# Comments
Comments: 7
Ryusuta [2017-06-18 08:03:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very kindly for the watch! I'm glad you enjoy my work and I hope you'll continue to do so!
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TroubleFormate [2016-07-21 17:58:45 +0000 UTC]
Read your story. I said I think it may be interesting if you can continue working on it. It would be interesting if you can find out what you will do as a dragon that other as a one will not do. I mean if you use your unique knowledge to make your story special, I will definitely want to see more.
The downside of it may be the lack of interacting. You did mention your friends and tell us what they are, but then, they didn't do anything, making them have no reasonable point to be there. And those bad guys who chase you were not described well. Maybe a picture of them rolling in pain after you strike back would make the scene vivid.
All that saying, I just want to tell you I am not a successful writer so far but I enjoy what I doing now. I like how people sharing their lives in the stories they wrote. It's stupid to ask somebody to read mine but I actually want to.
And that the Chinese character on your chest makes you like a Chinese medicine pharmacist but I think it suits you.
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9CWAI In reply to TroubleFormate [2016-07-21 19:15:16 +0000 UTC]
and the reason the story is even slightly acceptable is that I study kidnappings and I'm using parts of my real life but like I said I am editing it as I type this I will make my friends bigger characters why I didn't do it in the first place is our conversations last 1 hr each because that is how long my middle school periods are.
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9CWAI In reply to TroubleFormate [2016-07-21 19:07:19 +0000 UTC]
I know I think I might rewrite them longer and better later
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