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AltusOblivio
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[2011-02-04 00:33:48 +0000 UTC]
"I'm not too late this time"
(Ireland)
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# Comments
Comments: 207
u took down ur fanfictions the one with omega and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
can u put them back up pls i love u<3
and plssssssss there are worlds beyond this one too please
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[link] , [link] , [link] , [link] , [link] , [link]
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it's clear and blue as far as I can see~
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NIG NIG NIG NIG ELELLELRKEREKLRNER
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The desperate are water
they run down forever
and soak into silence
and end up together
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Dude I'm so stuck on Worlds
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i've always been here to help~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
what do u need help w/
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I shall explain tonight!
But you know I'm rewriting it as an original story. Hehe. There might be quite a lot of explaining to do :3
But you and I create amazing ideas
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww why can't it be kirby
ah a ha h a
i know mang
our brains are one brain
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because I'm gonna be PUBLISHED
Heehee, have I not told you anything about it yet? You must know
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OMGMGGMGOGMGMGGGG
OMHOGMFDOGDFMGPDFG
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I shall send you much stuff.
Same email you always had, right?
/you should get a gmail so we can chat
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That's not an answerrrr where should I send stuff too
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can u send 2 fanfiction /??wasd :0
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youuuu should reply what you think
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i like it so far and
i think i will have to like the lord anways
ze queen keeps reminding me of the queen from alice in wonderland mang
i like the name descargoooo o o oeoee
galacta knight could just be an old childhoood friend of LA LORD
or like brother 
uh i ahhahah
there's a lot of words a
anyways yes send me words and send me yummy yumy
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the worst issues are with Caecus Atrox itself
the same mindfuckery stuff that we struggled with the first time around. you remember, bro? >;D
Mhm, I'll hafta send you some stuff from the story isself
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hbmmm yes send me the mindfcukery cause i don't remember aexactly what the fckery was on
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the fuckery changed man. It morphed on me into this crazy fucking beast.
We need to know what Atrox eats
Like... it just ate power and matter in the original Worlds.
but now we need a more legit explanation. This thing ... has gotta get LEGIT.
What does caecus atrox feed on?
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it can eat on hopeless souls
if you want the book to be a sort of religious and involve the afterlife
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It isn't very religious.... although it does have really unexpected religious undertones, doesn't it? 0_0
Hmmm... but it eats matter too. what kind of life does it find in inanimate things?
it's like... the universe itself has life and breath. /how can I define that....
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yeah i'm liek eg
well if i was science and god and jess
i would make it eat off the nuclear energy from the vibrating atoms in a piece of matter
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I was thinking of something along the same lines
I mean, if atoms are always vibrating... they have movement and energy.
so Atrox eats the energy from living things - and nonliving things, because even nonliving things are always producing some minuscule amount of motion and energy
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ohoh and it could always be hot there [link]
because heat is transforming the solids to liquids to gases and gases is the highest
so maybe somehow it can control the weather and make it warm so it can get more energy to feed off of
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's pretty dead-looking, Atrox.
but yeh, it could perpetually have a sort of desert-like humid air. especially with the red sky; seems like a high temp kinda thing
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Another issue I had....
there's no Yamikage. There's this Kedivar dude who is in the Lord's past, but he doesn't survive the war.
so.... how could Atrox start intruding onto reality?
I thought something like - the potential to be Atrox exists in every single particle all the time. But, Atrox can only 'swap places' and devour the particle if certain conditions are met.
It's like when you have a supersaturated solution - all particles are dissolved and clear. Then, suddenly, if you stir just a little bit, everything precipitates and clouds the mixture.
Except, I dunno what those certain conditions would be. what would cause Atrox to intrude on reality?
we have no Dark Star rod now
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it could be like a distortion of time?
like atrox could exist outside of the realm of relative time
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yeh but in some point of time the reaction would have to start. We need a catalyst.
the catalyst could be some disturbance in time or matter, but then we need to explain why the disturbance happened in the first place
Hmmm....
Although - Atrox does exist outside reality's time.
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ok if i was the writer i would make atrox be the other side of the black hole
like a place got sucked into a black hole but it wasn't destroyed. it was a distorted reality
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so the catalyst is a black hole?
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idk say the planet they live on got sucked into a black hole and turned into the thing
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mhnnhmg
I needta send you stuffs
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I'm really busy this weekend but I will as soon as I can
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E E E E E E E E E LKNSKLNAKSCNA;SD
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