Aventure88 In reply to Barrowman2012 [2019-12-17 18:09:09 +0000 UTC]

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Barrowman2012 In reply to Aventure88 [2019-12-18 05:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comparisons and praise and for liking it.

No problem. I like the praise and also the good criticism you give. I maybe should have chosen a lighter tank. I also thought about such stuff that a strong heavy vehicle wouldn't be completely crushed. That is why I added the extreme velocity at which Wendy was catapulted when she hit her final height. In my first draft, I had an even heavier tank planned, but that would not add up as Helga wanted to test Wendy pull/push strength at and much smaller expected height at that moment.

I have the last chapters already written, the story I have mostly completed in a summary. The devil is in the details and when to reveal certain stuff and the sequence of so many different scenes I have written. I choose one thing I have to drop the other sometimes or story wouldn't make sense or things get too redundant.

Because of a big work project that spanned over 2 weekends. I couldn't work in chapter 15 or finish chapter 14. Luckily that is over, I'm exhausted. Today the last day and will be free for a few weeks and can spend time on my writing.

I have more stories written or setups of 2 chapters, I see what I can do.

I certainly will continue to write,

Thank you.

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