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BetaCicada
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[2008-03-26 23:02:24 +0000 UTC]
"Ringo! Mogire! Beam!"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 203; Deviations: 304; Watchers: 183
Watching: 60; Pageviews: 35115; Comments Made: 1873; Friends: 60
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Takehito HaradaFavorite movies: Life of Brian
Favorite games: Drawn To Life, Team Fortress 2, Disgaea, Monster Hunter
Favorite gaming platform: PC, PS Vita
Other Interests: Drawing, Video Games, Computer, The Works.
# Comments
Comments: 777
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i found us. bet you could guess who's who. :3cΒ
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Happy Birthday. Love your DTL works.
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Β β‘ HAPPY BIRTHDAY!~Β β‘Β I truly hope your day goes BEAUTIFULLY!!~
Your birthday may not be a big deal to you personally, I'm just here to let you know that it does mean at least something to many many others! Our friendship may have been stagnant for quite some time, but from this point onward, I can see it only continuing to grow...~ I'm so happy that I can make you so happy, and I'm SO happy we've known each other for so long! You may not be too active here on Deviantart, but that's ok! It's still a good place to spam you with love!!~ ># u #<
Now please, be sure to sit back and relax, have some cake if you like!~
This is YOUR special day, remember to make the most of it!!Β β₯
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Thanks. It's always nice to get something like this, despite you being able to simply say so directly to me whenever you like. I'm glad that we've been able to hang out more and I think it's safe to say that we've both been opening up more and more over this long period of time. We've experienced lots of fun, but also lots of pain through the days, but even so, I hope they persist for as long as we can savor them, so I hope you're prepared to put up with me for another year.Β
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I'm so thankful that you even deal with such pain in these days... I know my anxiety can be a handful and I'm incredibly grateful you're ok with it...~ ;u;
You really are such a good friend to me - and I actually am grateful for the times you make me feel forced to sit down and just have some fun... I can be a very serious sue, so that friendly reminder to stop stressing over my multiple projects is so super nice!!~
It hurts me to know sometimes you feel like you don't belong, because you most definitely do!~ You know where the door is if you ever want to leave, and I know you're fully aware of some past relationships I've had, so I really do mean it if you ever want to let this end... but as you've said! I'm very prepared to deal with you for another year, and very much for the rest of my life, hopefully~ ># u #<
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Hey man. Hap Birth!!
I know you don't really care about yours, but I hope it's a great one!
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Thanks! It means a lot to me that it means something to you guys, even if I'm pretty blatant about not caring about it at all. I hope its not too much of a hassle having to deal with my shit every year, I know that I can be pretty...different from the rest of you. Regardless, I always have a fun time with it and hope to continue our fun-filled/shit-filled days for years to come.
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Always a treat, man. No trouble at all.Β
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How can you tell I've been looking at them?
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Because I have widget that tells me who visited my pages.
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I know I been posting Drawn to Life stuff that isn't from the two games but I didn't know where to put them. I know I am not a great artist but I did it for a reason.
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Are they original characters?
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Yes they are from my reboot story.
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Then there should be a gallery folder called "OC Raposa". Submit it there.
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I'm right now doing the Reboot bosses.
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No, I don't. Sorry.
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Hello! I made a sprite of Circi, and Cutiesaurs said I should show it to you.
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Yeah, he's been trying to get it into the TheNewDrawn2LifeClub , so I've been seeing it from there. Looks alright, though. Good work.
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Ah, okay! Thanks. Have a good day Beta!Β
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Have you seen the Picture of Heather made by mmaker45 ?
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I have. Honestly, I kinda hoped for more of something along the lines of an illustration rather than a sprite rip. But good work on his side, I suppose.
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Well he use the heather Sprite from the next chapter as a base
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i sent an angel to watch over you last night but it came back. I asked βwhy?β The angel said βangels don't watch over angels.β Twenty angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, nine are playing, one is reading this message. Send this to ten friends including me. I guess if I don't get it back I'm not one of them. As soon as you get five replies, someone you love will quietly surprise you. Please read, not joking. God has seen you struggling with something. God says its over. A blessing is coming your way. If you believe in God send this message on. Please don't ignore it. You are being tested. God is going to fix two things BIG tonight in your favor. DROP Everything and pass it on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Don't break this chain. Send to 14 friends in 10 minutes. It's not that hard.
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Hey Beta have you seen my story for my Drawn to Life Reboot? Also I've made a petition for it as well.
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I have. And it's an interesting prospect, but I think it could do with some extra polish and substance. I would've liked to see some more consistent characters and some really nice character development. The minimalist character variety doesn't work as well as it might seem anymore, especially with modern gaming standards in this day and age. The emphasis on Drawn to Life that attracts a lot of the community are the characters, you know. When those are taken away in a reboot, I think it loses a lot of interest unless you can develop a set of characters with unique, but also multi-dimensional personalities that I can't quite see in your reboot just yet. Play around with them more. Find some sort of crisis point, something that gives the plot some more spice. I also recommend revising some of the dialogue- there are a lot of cliche'd and blandish lines in there that don't really make your characters... you know, your characters at all.
Also, be sure to check your grammar. Always check your grammar.
I would put it in the rough draft stage right now. If you want it to flourish, there are a lot of additions you need to think about opting for. It might do you good to rewrite the thing from the ground up, now that you know kind of what direction you want to go in. Just focus on the finer details of the plot, specifically fleshing out your characters.
One last thing. I'm sorry to say this, but your petition isn't going to do anything. 505 Games is a publisher. They don't make games. 5th Cell is, as of March of this year, not in a state to make anything, nor will people accept idea proposals, even if they ARE through some kind of petition, because that would mean they would have to pay those people to use their work. I like your enthusiasm, but the future of DTL isn't in our hands.Β
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Okay so the characters need a little more spice but I am trying to do quality over quantity and that why some characters are flat. But I do have motives for the four main characters. Aura is struggling to be a good Mayor, Billy must use his heart to trust people, Mari is trying to fit in, Cutie want's to go home, and Hero wants to prove his worth. I have a much older story there were less characters and all of them were just flat and they were Scribblenauts and Maxwell and Lily were going to be in there. I'm just saying I focus on the story than the characters that's all.
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