BritishToby In reply to Strygiform [2013-09-23 20:41:56 +0000 UTC]

no need to thank me for you being so talented

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BritishToby In reply to OmuYasha [2013-06-17 15:14:44 +0000 UTC]

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OmuYasha In reply to BritishToby [2013-06-17 22:53:08 +0000 UTC]

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BritishToby In reply to OmuYasha [2013-06-18 06:48:43 +0000 UTC]

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OmuYasha In reply to BritishToby [2013-06-18 07:36:50 +0000 UTC]

how is it?

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BritishToby In reply to OmuYasha [2013-06-18 14:15:40 +0000 UTC]

one of the best werewolf stories i have ever had the pleasure of reading

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OmuYasha In reply to BritishToby [2013-06-18 21:02:25 +0000 UTC]

really? Cause that was still in the middle of a revision

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BritishToby In reply to OmuYasha [2013-06-19 06:21:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah, the only flaw i saw with it where a couple of spelling misakes

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OmuYasha In reply to BritishToby [2013-06-19 11:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Yea, Chapter 24-27 have not been revised. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in it. Some inexcusable ones to be honest. I'll fix them up, and add more content. You know the rough draft was 167 pages long.

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BritishToby In reply to OmuYasha [2013-06-19 14:32:16 +0000 UTC]

its ok about the spelling mistakes, we all do it some times, wow the rough draft was only 167 pages long, i was amazed with how quickly i read it because im not a fluent reader

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OmuYasha In reply to BritishToby [2013-06-19 23:00:26 +0000 UTC]

I did write some more in chapter 24

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OmuYasha In reply to BritishToby [2013-06-19 07:53:14 +0000 UTC]

well I'm not an editor, and I'm still in revisions. Though some words are spelled differently in US vs. UK I hear

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