Dlinuyasha In reply to InGodzHandz [2018-02-12 03:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Its really well written and i look forward to seeing where it goes^W^

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InGodzHandz In reply to Dlinuyasha [2019-08-23 18:12:34 +0000 UTC]

I hope you loved where it went.

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InGodzHandz In reply to Dlinuyasha [2018-02-12 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]

I like asking this.  What is your favorite part of the story?

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Dlinuyasha In reply to InGodzHandz [2018-02-12 06:04:56 +0000 UTC]

hmmm thats tough its all really good, flowely is smart and underhanded, sans is still putting all the peices together and caring which i really love, his HP going up like frisks was a really cool idea which i havent seen done yet, I think thats my favorite part, or the part when frisk is cutting himself and is locked in the bathroom and sans and the others are remembering all the other timelines that have already happened. (please forgive my spelling, I know its not my strongest trait)

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InGodzHandz In reply to Dlinuyasha [2018-02-12 06:40:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that Frisk cutting himself wasn't too much.  I tried to show it as the violent, ugly thing it is, even though Frisk did it for his determination magic, it wasn't pretty.

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InGodzHandz In reply to Dlinuyasha [2018-02-12 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]

You can't choose a favorite part because they're all so good.  That's so cool!

Flowey is a piece of shit in this story.  He uses Frisk's depression against him in an attempt to destroy him.  It's cruel but characteristic.

I figured Sans would be this way, sympathizing with Frisk but still being cautious and smart.  I like that helping Frisk is helping Sans, too.  It shows that when you build a relationship with someone you may end up helping yourself, too.

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Dlinuyasha In reply to InGodzHandz [2018-02-12 09:00:21 +0000 UTC]

indeed, your story is written in a more "real way" not just some magic cure but seeing what resetting over and over again can do to someones mind and that you need help and healing the long way, with work and support... and no i didnt think frisk cutting himself was to much, it seemed to really fit in to where frisks mindset was/is, being in that kinda place the frisk is it would be more out of place for him not to try and do something like that. and I like how you have flowey, he really is a prick and needs to have all the bad times lol but it felt like a good demon for frisks depression(like how they say you have to face your demons to be able to move on, flowey seems like that demon to me just in a phyical since)


And yes ive enjoyed all your story so far and haven't run into a part that I didnt think was well done ^W^(so like i said picking a fav is tough lol)

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InGodzHandz In reply to Dlinuyasha [2018-02-21 04:52:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad.  I thought Frisk activating his determination magic with his blood was a fitting metaphor for depression and why fighting it without support is impossible.  As Flowey said, the process would eventually kill him since he used it so much.  Now, Frisk is getting better, but he still has to work from wanting to die and thinking his death would solve everything to having the energy and determination to fight again.  

I'm gonna do more with Flowey.  Just wait...

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Dlinuyasha In reply to InGodzHandz [2018-02-21 06:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Im looking forward to seeing what you do with him ^W^

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InGodzHandz In reply to Dlinuyasha [2018-02-22 01:55:09 +0000 UTC]

I uploaded another chapter.

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Dlinuyasha In reply to itsmyccrets [2018-01-30 09:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^W^

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Dlinuyasha In reply to itsmyccrets [2017-01-29 02:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^W^

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joselyn565 In reply to joselyn565 [2016-02-15 00:06:19 +0000 UTC]

*thx

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Arixese In reply to Arixese [2016-01-07 17:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Ah! And the watch, too!

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