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InsomniaWriter
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[2014-10-22 03:17:37 +0000 UTC]
"I ship it like Fed-EX"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 867; Deviations: 115; Watchers: 83
Watching: 66; Pageviews: 18104; Comments Made: 179; Friends: 66
# Interests
Favorite movies: MARVEL Movies, Horror, RomanceFavorite TV shows: The 100, Rick and Morty, and any Cartoons honestly
Favorite bands / musical artists: Rock, Pop, Alternative, Indie
Favorite books: I love all books that include: Romance, Mystery, or Young Adult Fiction
Favorite writers: Too many to name
Favorite games: PC Games
Favorite gaming platform: PC
Other Interests: Anime, Craziness, OTP, Shipping
# About me
INFP ❤ Sagittarius ❤ Gryffindor ❤ Thunderbird ❤ FemaleHiya, I'm Cece! I'm a young female writer who loves to read and play video games. I love writing poetry, because it is the only way I feel I can express myself. Any criticism is welcome and I enjoy a meaningful conversation if anyone needs to talk.
Best Friends: and
Sites:
Wattpad: www.wattpad.com/user/dreamerin…
Write the World: writetheworld.com/profiles/173…
Hello Poetry: hellopoetry.com/InsomniaWriter…
# Comments
Comments: 53
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Hey there! I meant to say thanks for your faves with a poem in return:
I question not the choices
others make for me. I question
why I let them.
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Thank you for the fave.
I hope you enjoyed my haiku.
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Np! I love UnOrdinary so I really liked your drawing. Have you seen the newest update?
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*Distant screaming
I thought all of my questions would be answered, but nuuuuuu! I actually hope that those two aren't dead, but now Arlo's finally getting what he deserves! And yet... Uru-chan still hasn't given a straight answer on his abilities.
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I know right! I really hope he didn't kill them because it could ruin a lot of things. The smirk wiped off of Arlo's face by the end of the episode was hilarious. People have been saying he might have the power of Ability Mimicry or Amplification.
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Honestly for me, I think it's ability alchemy. He can use abilities separately, or use one to boost another, like when he used the power from demon claws to amplify the power of the wind, boosting its power and speed, thus creating windblades
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JOHN BEAT ARLO'S BUTT SO HARD. THAT NEW CHAPTER WAS SO COOL! I guess now we know that John's stat also changes with whoever's abilities he is copying at the moment. Do you think he could copy Seraphina's abilities?
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That's what a couple of us were debating on discord, and the outcomes could differ greatly if John's ability was to copy an ability used, or copy an ability he sees, so we don't know for certain yet...
But other than that... YEAS JOHN FINALLY BEAT UP ARLO!!! "I'll dethrone you"
*distant screaming*
In all honesty though, I would thank Arlo for making John reveal his ability.
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Thank you for the favorite! If you're interested, feel free to watch me for future updates and new work!
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You are almost me in a nutshell. Excpt the writing part.
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Once you start writing we'll be the same
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shadow-ninja600.deviantart.com…
there it is sorry if it is bad I just wrote came to mind.
And I hope I will be on your level of writing someday. Thank you so much for talking to me I constantly am checking my notifications waiting for you to answer me. I'm a total creep. XD
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Amazing idea, but here are a few tips that will really improve this and future stories!
1. When using dialogue, use " to indicate when a character is speaking. This makes it less confusing for the reader!
Ex: Pacifica sighed, "Whatever, Dip 'n Dot."
2. Another tip when using dialogue is to separate talking from actions. This makes it more pleasing to the readers eyes and doesn't clump the words!
Ex: A wave of nostalgia passed through Dipper as he stepped into the old, rickety Mystery Shack. From the corner of his eye, he saw a man - who's appearance was similar to that of a beaver - in the same suit and fez that had greeted him when he had first entered the town of Gravity Falls.
"Soos!" Dipper exclaimed happily, prompting the beaver man to turn in surprise. A face-splitting, bucktoothed grin broke across his chubby face as he recognized the young brunette
He yelled, "Dipper, dude!" Suddenly tackling Dipper in a suffocating bear hug.
3. Show, don't tell! Don't just say where they are, explain it through the eyes of the characters! This makes it more natural.\
Dipper glanced down at the rotting bus seat he and his siter Mabel were currently perched upon, running his hand across the old worn leather. From his left sounded a snore as Mabel leaned against the yellowed windows that showcased the millions of trees that surrounded them. She had fallen asleep sometime earlier due to the long hours it took travelling from California to Oregon by bus.
4. Do not use all dialogue. Explain the surroundings, use thoughts running in the characters minds and really detail the scene so readers can picture what you are trying to convey!
5. You don't really have to use '______ thought as they...'. Instead, just use something like...
Ex: After 2 years, the rundown town had changed only slightly since he (or Dipper) had last been here.
6. Make things exciting! Don't only use descriptive words like 'happy' or 'sad' or 'mad'. Make them ecstatic, depressed, enraged.
Again, you don't have to use these tips, but they really will better your writing (I know they have for mine)! I did enjoy the story and I loved Pacifica (That drat, though XD and the persistency to lay with Dipper) I'm excited to read more of your stories, so please keep writing!
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Thank you very much for the favorite and the watch <33 I really appreciate it. c:
Have a wonderful week.
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Thank you so very much for the watch, comment, favorite, and llama!!! You're so nice
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Thanks, but truly you deserved it, because I enjoyed your poem and I'm excited to read your stuff!
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Your poem was very beautiful! Hit the correct spot to make me feel
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Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!
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Your art is awesome, I liked reading the stories.
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Thank you so much I'm so glad you like them!
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Could I have an icon of Caeshi plz? crazy-caeshi.deviantart.com/ar…
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I'm so sorry for not replying earlier My computer has gotten a virus and I have been having troubles doing ANYTHING on it. I'm not going to be able to do commissions for now until I can either get this problem fixed; or get a new computer. Most likely the first though. I'll try to make Caeshi when I can, but right now I can't
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Aww~ Is okay~ Could it actually be of Dr. Krankcase and Caeshi?
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